| "Sailor Moon H Legend of the moon shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2009 13:19 CST
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honey, when are you gonna update? Im not tryig to be rude I know there are a lot of reasons why, but can you let us know somehow that you havent abandoned us?
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Title: IMPORTANT NOTICE
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2008 21:23 CDT
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My dear moon shinobi fans I have some unfortunate news I won't be able to upload anymore chaopters to this site so I apologize there will be no more moon shinobi, however I have some good news I have upload all of my stories to fanfiction.net and as for moon shinobi yes I have began to rewrite the story so far I have rewrote chapters 1,2 and 3 so please be patient until I get to chapter 51 I promise once I finish rewritting all of the chapters I will start with chapter 52 thank you for your attention and cheers.
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 23:45 CDT
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is the chapter still up on the screen when you are uploading it? if not try copying it to regular word pad (the one with out spell check) and saving it there then try to upload it...those are the tricks i used...and make sure the chapter is closed out and saved before uploading
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Title: HELP
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2008 10:27 CDT
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I need help I can't upload chapters when I'm going to upload the chapter the screen has a message that reads ERROR not supported file format I have Microsfot Word 2007 I dont know what the message means is there someone who can help me with this because if it keeps up I won't be able to upload any further chapters from my stories.
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2008 12:20 CDT
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i liked it and Mari-naruto taking chibi-usa's broach caught me blind sided but i can understand the reasonings behind it. i wonder if there is going to be any romance between Setsuena and Kakishi-sensei. you said there is a connection between sauske, sakura and the scouts right? what if they are related...though that seems like it would be a bit overdone now that i think about it...but continue with the good work cant wait for the next chapter
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2008 11:41 CDT
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is it just me or did the chappie get longer? anywho, hokage-sama i doubt is going to be very happy about this and i dont think she will believe him when he comes back that he was taken by force..and i have a feeling alot of agnst is going to ensue. please update soon...please please please and one thing YO JOE
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Title: About the senshis?
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2008 00:29 CDT
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No the senshis ARE NOT coming you will have to keep reading the story and I wont say anything about Chibi Usa transforming I dont want to say any spoilers sorry.
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2008 00:38 CDT
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omg i loved it...please update soon i think the scouts are on their way and pervy-sage is gonna have a field day with them amd will chibiusa transform here?
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Reviewed By: princessofdobermans(nsi) On: May 14, 2008 23:13 CDT
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i love it please update soon, you still need some work with proper quote usage and paragraphs, spelling and proper grammar but you are making a dramatic improvement from start to where you are now . and a little advice when you use Chan, Kun, san, sama(lord/lady) use the - with is, and Koi(girlfriend) and Koshi(boyfriend), father is Otou-san, Otou-chan(daddy), ka-chan(momma), Okka-san(mother), Oba-san(grandma), Obaa-san(aunt). so there is a few more words and meanings for you for some of the words you use a lot in English but with the theme you are going with switch it to Japanese and dong forget the space then the -. i hope you update soon Dobie
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Reviewed By: princessofdobermans(nsi) On: May 14, 2008 23:13 CDT
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i love it please update soon, you still need some work with proper quote usage and paragraphs, spelling and proper grammar but you are making a dramatic improvement from start to where you are now . and a little advice when you use Chan, Kun, san, sama(lord/lady) use the - with is, and Koi(girlfriend) and Koshi(boyfriend), father is Otou-san, Otou-chan(daddy), ka-chan(momma), Okka-san(mother), Oba-san(grandma), Obaa-san(aunt). so there is a few more words and meanings for you for some of the words you use a lot in English but with the theme you are going with switch it to Japanese and dong forget the space then the -. i hope you update soon Dobie
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 12:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2008 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2008 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story!
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Reviewed By: dragoonvixenofshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 15:37 CDT
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please use quotation marks in the story so we readers know when the charicters are speaking. and indent when a person does start to speak and for a new person speaking, so we know who and when the dialogue belongs and when it started, other than that its really good so far. right now im on chapter 2 and the quote thing was really annoying me. vixen
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Title: About the next chapter
Reviewed By: Gravenimage [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2008 14:53 CST
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Al right people Im a little undecided about writting the next chapter I have been thinking in making the chunin exams I might write a three part saga BUT I also have been thinking in skipping the chunin exams and beginning with the first time skip of the story I don't know what to do I need your opinions.
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