| "Sailor Moon H Legend of the moon shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: mad6231 On: June 17, 2007 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work! The storyline is very creative as is the pairing with Naruto. One question I have is are you going to have Naruto or Sasuke use any of the techniques that they learned during the 3-year gap in the Naruto universe?
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 08:08 CDT
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I Love The Chapter:26!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 13:13 CDT
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So far this chapter is pretty good I loved the part where Kakashi looked at sailor and friends well looking at there outfits and thinking that Jiraiya would go nuts lol oh yeah and tat Basilsk youmas I might be mistaken but isn`t the Basilsk a snake creature that turns ppl into stone by I think spitting on them oh well please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 12:36 CDT
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LOL so your not going to say if there will be anymore of Naruto`s friends comming to help so what you are saying there won`t be anybody else but by saying you have to read on meaning you just want me to ead knowing that none of Naruto`s friends are going to help him thats cool you could of just said no
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 12:27 CDT
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I Love The Story!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 01:49 CDT
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Cool Kakashi is back cool I cann`t wait for the very very small part of the next chapter you should have more of Naruto`s friends come and help like Neji, Tenten and Lee or maybe Kiba, Hinata and Shino with there teacher Kurenai that would be cool no Hinata wouldn`t be good since she likes Naruto and if she finds out Naruto loves Hotaru she wold be heart broken oh well I still say sent more of his friends to help out
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
So far for this chapter I like it I guess thats all so please update soon
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Title: hm
Reviewed By: RubiFelton On: June 06, 2007 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm.. your story has an interestinf plot but i'm having trouble reading it. With your story you have to make a new paragraph every time some one talks and put " " before and after some one talks. plus it wouldn't hurt to put a little more detail. BUT you do have a good story idea XD
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Title: Good
Reviewed By: RubyFelton On: May 30, 2007 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good idea for a fic there's only a slight problem. It gets a little confusing for who's saying what so you need to make a new paragraph for each time some one says something and you need to put " " before and after someone talks. Example: "Naruto where the heck are you?" yelled sasuke. "I'm over here dummy," replied Naruto. Like that. but overall I like this story. XD
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 20:43 CDT
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Those two chapters were really good the cool thing is I had something to read while hoping these other damn authors would get off there asses and update there stories it is so so boring when they don`t update and there isn`t anything to read oh well please update soon
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:21 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 22:25 CDT
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I really liked that chapter it was finally long and I don`t care if it ended in a cliffhanger because it was good kind sucked about Kakashi seems to me kinda weak there but anyways it was still good and long I like that so take your time and update with another good chapter
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:20 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:19 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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