| "Sailor Moon H Legend of the moon shinobi" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 01:17 CDT
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Well that was a very short start for this chapter oh well I guess I will just have to wait heck I will just wait until I see you had updated atleast three more times before I read it so that I am not wasting time only reading a short part then have to wait yet again oh well keep up the good work and please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 13:43 CDT
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That was a cool chapter and it is cool that next chapter they find out abot Naruto`s past but what would really be cool would be having Kakashi come back for good like you said he would but never happened please bring Kakashi back it won`t be a good Naruto story if Kakashi isn`t in it oh well please update soon please
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 06:47 CDT
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Please use quotation marks. It is exceedingly difficult to read without proper punctuation.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 07:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:18 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 08:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:17!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 02:19 CDT
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ok well the start was ok I guess oh well so when will Kakashi come back and when or if he does will he actually stay with them or will he just tell them couple of things and then leave again I just hope you have him stay with them for the rest of your story but I kinda doubt that oh well just update soon please
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 14:59 CDT
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More clues to Naruto`s dream oooook so after this clue are they going to forget it and then yor going to have yet another little clue 3 chapters later oh well I guess the story is ok I have been tring to force myself to stay awake while reading it
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 16:34 CDT
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I agree I am also dying to know what Naruto`s dream is about you haven`t said anything about it for a long time and when you do its not much and I remember one part when Naruto talked about his dream both Luna and Artemis those cats they both said there going to keep an eyes on him but after that you had them do everything but keeping an eye on him so did they just forget about it ad what about Naruto does he still have the dreams or did they just stop I wnt to know oh well sorry to ask to much just update if you can
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Reviewed By: Fan for now on On: April 27, 2007 12:38 CDT
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You better get the next chapters out soon. They need to tell more about his dream and what it mean, I'm dieing to know.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 15:35 CDT
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I kinda doubt you will reply to ths be I was wondering when Kakashi said he will join them as soon as he can does that mean he is going to join up with them for good and not join up for alittle while then leave or will he be with them the rest of your story I hope so just to find out what Kakashi does when the girls transforms lol and his smartass remarks please petty please have Kakashi join them for good and update soon
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:16 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 14:27 CDT
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Well that chapter I guess was ok I was kinda falling asleep on it at the end sorry and for Venus and she deals with love lol love sucks so the only thing I can think of is Love Blossom because doesn`t she use love chain before sorry thats the only thing I can think of and to me it kinda sounds gay lol
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 07:39 CDT
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I Love The Chapter:15 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 22:58 CDT
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Awwww man right when it gets to the part where they want to know whats going on when you had to stop writing that sucks just kidding I guess I will just have to wait another day just to fine out what there reaction is oh well please update real soon
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Reviewed By: lord fox On: April 10, 2007 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story so far it is so cool. I have a ? well the Fox play a roll in the fights to come? also well the seal brak on naruto? Also how does the fox stand up in power to the other bad guys I hope that Naruto goes Fox on the Naguvers soon because it would be so coool to see that Also love the Naruto Hotaru stuff ones again love the story keep up the good work
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