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Reviewed By: M On: August 27, 2010 01:36 EDT
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I was so not expecting things to progress like that.I thought it'd take a while for Aria to have her daughter and for Aten to die again.Shows how much I think ehXD So Ariana(honestly thought she'd have a sea name like Aria's other kids,not another form of her own name)is Seto's kid.I cant say I wasnt expecting that but I was hoping she would be Umi's.Poor dude only has sons so far and he really wanted a girl:P better luck next time man*pats Umi on the back*wonder what she'll look like and if she'll have powers too? Something I definatly wasnt expecting was Bakura having kids with Jewel.I thought the baby business was over with after Aria's kid. But judging from what I read in there they'll have some sort of point in the plot.I dont the point adding them if they dont.Since they have shadow magic I'll take that as a maybeXDI have to wonder,what does Jewel look like?I dont think I really caught that besides the fact shes tan.Anyway thanks for the update and am looking forward to more,hopefully soon^^
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Reviewed By: bb On: August 25, 2010 20:18 EDT
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Wow,so much has gone on over just those few chapters.I was definately not expecting such,usually you slowly preceed through an event but now its like drama hits one right after the other.And some of the things I was not expecting,such as Aten to die so quickly after being brought back.That seemed abit random to me.As does the fact Ryou died and Robbie.I knew they would at some point but yet again it seemed out of place. And this Jewel carrying Bakura's triplets.I thought Aria and Rhonda would be the only ones with kids here.Hmm I wonder if these kids will now be the ones to overcome the pharaoh instead of Rhett and possibly Kai?Bakura did say he could sense they had shadow magic.I dont see the point giving them powers if they dont have some role for the plot.I guess comedic relief would do otherwise. And it looks like with how things turned out with Ariana(I thought she'd have a sea nameXD)that Umi will be a manly man if you know what I mean.Poor guy was looking forward to having a daughter of his onw:PI'm glad he accepted her and Aria into his life.Thats a winner right thereXD I'm glad to see this was updated and with many new chapters but honestly they seemed rushed.Its as if you want to complete this as soon as possible and honestly I couldnt blame you for how long you've been with this series.But isnt it best to let the series go out with bang and not rushed?I felt the latest chapters you uploaded werent your best work.Sorry if that upsets you.I will be looking foward to more,soon hopefully*puppy eyes*No matter what though I will read this series to the end8DYours is one of the few Yugioh stories I follow anymore^^Till next chapter!
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Reviewed By: M On: February 10, 2010 00:38 EST
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You die or something?This hasnt been updated in months.If your not going to continue,please put that in your summary.Otherwise your just getting peoples hopes up for a chapter that wont come:(
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Reviewed By: .................. On: December 06, 2009 19:51 EST
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Uh you do realize a chapter was supposed to be posted months ago.Why havent you updated?The longer it takes to complete the story the more people will lose interest:/
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Reviewed By: .......... On: October 07, 2009 02:17 EDT
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UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF RA!!!!XD
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Reviewed By: ? On: October 02, 2009 21:28 EDT
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Are you going to update anytime soon?A new chap was supposed to be up on the 30th but its the 2nd of the next month!I wanna see what happens next!^^
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Reviewed By: ......... On: September 01, 2009 19:17 EDT
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O.oMarik you dumbass!God I can only imagine what horrors you have in store for us.I wonder how the others, especially Aria, will react to this?I cant wait to find out^^I found a beautiful name the other day while playing through my games.Miya-night sea.Just a suggestion for Aria's kid:P
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Title: Y.A17
Reviewed By: yamialex17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2009 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG I LOVED IT.... IF I WERE A YAMI.... I'd so have to visit my ex and do a little of what baku's planing to do..... SOOOOO GOOD.... can't wait for the next chapie......
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Reviewed By: yamialex17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2009 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where have you gone???? i miss reading this story....:( plz update soon
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Reviewed By: bb On: August 07, 2009 16:18 EDT
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Oh god Aten.Its sad that he would have to go through that when he never did anything wrong in his life.He's been through so much shit he deserves a happy ending.at least Marik will bring him back but at what cost?Now things are getting interesting^^please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Aislynn Goldleaf (Being Lazy) On: June 29, 2009 05:43 EDT
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Uh, oh... Didn't Marik forget something? Joey has Aten's liver! I can see (just from that, forget all the massive foreshadowing going on!) that something's going to go wrong! Once again, a wonderfully well-written chapter. Loved the little scene with Bakura/Ryou too!
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Title: Very impressive work!
Reviewed By: The Schizo of Destiny (not logged in) On: April 10, 2009 16:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter really put tears in my eyes. Aten was a great person, I can really relate to his friends and family when it comes to their feelings. You did a great job at writing this, it has the right mood and the right words, and the character's reactions are natural. I'm still very impressed by your work and I hope you'll keep this up. Good luck writing the other chapters! I'll be waiting patiently for your next update. :)
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Reviewed By: bb On: April 05, 2009 17:25 EDT
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Why havent you updated?Its april you know?The chapter said you'd update on the 27th of March.I love your stories!Please update when possible.I want to see the plot thicken after such a sad event.I feel bad for the gang and Aten.I knew this was coming but it actaully gave me a ache in my belly when I read this.Few fics have actually made me feel that way.See from you when the update happens^^
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Reviewed By: Y.A.17 On: December 16, 2008 21:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i actually cried on this one it was so sad... and brought back a bad memory/dream... i may not know what it's like to lose a child but i cried for days after the dream i have involing my first....
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Reviewed By: Aislynn G (too sad to log in) On: November 14, 2008 13:37 EST
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::sniffle, sniffle:: I don't really have anything to comment about except that this ::sob!:: was really well written. Before I go to my room and cry my eyes out, I'd just like to give you the "Giant Hanky Award". ::sniffle:: I mean, we all have to go sometime, an' we knew this was comming, but... still... waaaaaaaaahhhhhh! ::runs off to bedroom::
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