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| "The Perfect Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] | Reviewed By: pandora On: January 07, 2003 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story. i love how it has so many elements it is both funny and dramatic as well as interesting. also i like how you had trunks come into this time line. i can not wait for him to reveal his past. | Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 On: December 11, 2002 12:38 CST
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Hey!! Nice story again!! And you've written 'Vegeta's breakdown' sooooooooo good!!! I'm liking this story even more!! And I wonder how Vegeta will end up...is it the worms and all that made Vegeta like this or Freeza??? Well, please update soon!!
1.)Mike Tyson animal or misunderstood?
who's this guy? :s
2.)R.Kelly child molester or innocent?
I don't know actually, both could be possible
3.)Who is the best actor in the world?
Uhm, I have more actors I like, well, I like a lot actors, so uhm.........there is no best actor in the word, most are good or they would'n play in movies!!
4.)Did Bulma ever love Yamcha, or was he just convenient?
I don't think Bulma ever loved Yamcha, or they wouldn't had an on and of relationship. And she wouldn't fall in love with Vegeta I think.
5.)What is love at fist sight for Vegeta when he first met Bulma?
Well, it wasn't love at first sight (you DO mean this huh?). Watch the namek saga if you don't believe me!! But I was kinda suprises when I've herad of the Vegeta/Bulma paring. I di'dn't espect that so I don't think it was love at firt site.
6.)Is Michael Jackson really E.T.?
He's looking like an alien....I've heard he's gonna play in a move where he had the role of an alien, well, he doesn't need much make-up for the effect..
7.)Who do you think would win in a fight Vegeta, or Inuyasha?
who's Inuyasha??? Well, I don't think I would win, I'm not strong you see
8.)When do you think Bulma, fell in love with Vegeta, and think hard about this one?
Right before Trunks came!! She had a dream about Veggie and her kissing! and when her dad said Vegeta's fuel was almost up, she...um...how do you say that?
9.)Which one is cooler, Future Trunks, or GT Trunks?
GT has never showed on the TV!! But I like the Trunks out of the Buu saga, is he the same??
10.) Did Brittany Spears cheat on Justin Timberlake?
I've heard that she cheated on Justin with Ben Affleck yesterday (pretty late, I know) and that's the reason Justin dumped her. But it could be true and that the innocent-girl-act was fake! I won't be suprised anyway!
11.) Ellen Degenorous was dumped by Ann Heshe for a man T/F.
who? Ellen who? Ann Heshe, who's that?
12.) Which show do you think is best? A.) MTV’s Fear B.) Friends C.) The practice D.) That 70’s show E.) Mad TV.
Friends!!! I like comedy, and the rest isn't on the tv in holland I think!
13.) Is Ally Mcbeal a skeleton or the ghost from Snoop dog’s movie Bones?
a skeleton!! deffenitley! she's so thin!
14.) Is it just I, or does Christina Agulara look like a wet puddle, or a pit-bull with a blond wig? Also, is she trying to be like Shakira with blond and black hair streaks
Chris was sweaty in her new video Dirrty!! And Shakira's black/blond combination is a lot prettier! I think Chris looks more like a poodle (lady marmelade video)
15.) Who do you think Misty’s baby daddy is?
ZARBON!!! Or Radditz, one of the two!! Trunks is a little far-fetched. But I think Zarbon, what kind of combination would that child be??
I don't think I'm gonna win this anyway, but this was fun!! well, please update soon!!!!! | Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really great, and if some of ya'll don't like it, then go suck an egg!
Anyway, it was hilarious, and then it just started to plain scare me....But I hope you will update soon!
Ja ne
Lots 'o' Love~
*Crazy One* | Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 11:39 CST
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heej! me again!!! Are they finally leaving from that planet 80's??? Is Yamcha out of the story?? Not that he was a important person....and what the hell is going on with Vegeta? It's the worms isn't it? I wander how it'll turn out with Freeza and all. What's it with the worms anyway, and what's Freeza become (oh, I guess that's a thing that'll read later!!). I hope you write more about te worms and stuff, I don't like the 80's!!!!!! But it's still a good story line and II'm happy that they leave that planet, and what's Freeza up to? Well, I'm quite curious, please update soon!!!! :) | Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this is certainly getting interesting ....Love the Yamucha bashing (gomen ne J-chan)My friend is a big Yamucha lover and might come across this >_>. Keep up the great artwork too and by the way do you take requests? Hmm the only thing I ask for is a lil more humor please ^^. Keep up the great Job VJ. Toodles. Bura-chan | Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 On: October 31, 2002 09:27 CST
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me again! Nice chapter! I can only hope for more yamcha-bashing!!!!! And a lillte bit of more action, but it's your story! keep up te good work and i keep reading it! | Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2002 11:50 CDT
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At first: LET PANSY BOY SUFFER!!!!!!
Allright, that was obvious, but make it reeeaaaaalllly bad for him okay? I love yamcha bashing!!!!!! *smirks evily*
ojeah, about crono-trunks, I never guessed it really WAS Trunks!! And he and Crono just come for cell, who is destroyed. (earth's destroyed, so Cell must be destroyed to, he was a larve back then!) I wanna see Veggie's face when he finds out when Trunks is his son! Well, anyway, I enjoyed reading this!! Please continue!!! | Reviewed By: Kandy On: October 09, 2002 17:56 CDT
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that proved interesting. Poor Vegeta, if only he would learn to share... | Reviewed By: Kandy On: October 09, 2002 17:56 CDT
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that proved interesting. Poor Vegeta, if only he would learn to share... | Reviewed By: Kandy On: October 09, 2002 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Bulma=naive, what a dummie. good job, next chapter... | Reviewed By: Kandy On: October 09, 2002 17:53 CDT
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doesn't recycle? where did you get that from? That was too funny, espically the songs. Another thing, where did the spite come from? At least the twins died together. Moving along, I really don't care. On more thing-OH NO!... | Reviewed By: Kandy On: October 09, 2002 17:53 CDT
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Misty is quite a character. Oh my goosh, I'm tearing up. NOBODY has every made Nappa, a some what decent guy. And now this some what decent guy is gone. Why? That's so-wait...Is that what Shin's dream was about? Vegeta tranfomation, no words. You made him go crazy. I'm a keep lovin' this... | Reviewed By: Kandy On: October 09, 2002 17:52 CDT
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Poor Nappa, I think you made me like him. Now I'm gonnna be depressed. Bulma talks to much, can't something bad happen to her? Damn. | Reviewed By: Kandy On: October 09, 2002 17:52 CDT
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Goku has finally cursed. The world IS ending. The sad truth, I feel just the way he does. Except about the whole death part, I'd rather be a vegetable. They are so stupid! | Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 03, 2002 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You capture all emotions I could think of and I love the way you have stretched out the romance of Bulma and Vegeta not jumping each other straight away like other authors have done. But the best is the way you inserted twists into the story I never guessed that the boy was Trunks you put me in shock when I found out. Expecially when I saw that clues were there all along (how could I of missed them) Great story Very Original and Enjoyable This may suprise you but I'm normally a strict reviewer but your story IS fantastic making me hang out for more.
So Get to it ASAP!!!!
By the way you made me crack up so bad when Vegeta and Zarbon were discussing the prospect of Trunks being gay and also how Trunks was moving his ass quick silver to get away from the unwanted attention of the gay dudes lol.
Don't stop and I mean it!!!! | | Pages (4): [ « < 1 2 3 4 > » ] |
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