| "The Perfect Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!! Nice!! That was a really good chapter!! I want to know how it continues with vegeta!!
I hope the next chapter comes soon!! |
Reviewed By: yamikaiba8764 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well dude you could tell i like this rating make more MAKE MORE |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 14:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep on writing its getting good!!!! |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 09:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really a great and orriginal story. I love it and I'm waiting for the next chapter. 'cause I like to know how it continues. I'ts a great peace of work and keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 11:51 CST
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there aren't much who have reviewed...anyway...I hope you update soon, I'm really looking forward for the next chapter!!!! :-) |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: July 11, 2002 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In the bed under her comforter. A lone figure sits hugging her teddy bear in one arm and bottles of Jack Daniles and Absolute Vodka in the other still chatting those famous words, The DAM WORMS ARE NOT REAL AND CAN NOT HURT ME, THE GOTDAM WORMS CAN'T HURT ME.....
I LOVE your story, so what if my liver be hard to tell between that of a 99yr.old man than a 22yr.old female. Hell as kong as I get to sleep at night who gives a flying fu--! Update soon got go shopping now,dam worms! |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: July 08, 2002 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I enjoyed your story and thought it was very creative, I must now sign myself up for therpy and just remind myself...The Dam worms are not real and can not hurt me... The Dam worms can't hurt me....
Update ASP! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: July 02, 2002 10:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this a long time ago, well at least the first two chapters. I have to say I like it a lot, I have never read the "Lord of the Rings" any thing, so I'm kind of lost. But, the DBZ, I'm following y'all just great. It's really nicely written, and I love the comments Frieza makes about his workers. They're funny to me. Any who, keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2002 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An Original fic i am really enjoying and Keep them chappys coming! Its great. Bura |
Reviewed By: Me ! On: June 28, 2002 09:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story and plz put up sum more chapters sry im bad at reviews : ) |
Reviewed By: Storm On: June 25, 2002 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying this story. Charactors are basiclly all in charactor (so many fanfics change charactors personalities to something totally different), grammer and spelling are quite good and the plot itself is really original. My only complaint is the spacing. You dont need 20 million lines between each pharagraph. It gets really anoying after awhile. I'm not sure if your trying to make the story seem longer or what but try to keep the spacing down to 1 or 2 spaces. Keep writing I'd like to read the next installments!! |
Reviewed By: some body On: May 13, 2002 23:39 CDT
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Very interesting story I haven't read anything like it, very intriguing story I love the action in the chapter and the fact that every one is pretty much incharacter makes it ten times better good work!!! |
Reviewed By: Honzo On: May 12, 2002 19:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Written very well incharacter vert interesting story I have read some of it on fanficton.net very original piece of work. wonderful story thus far keep those chapters coming! |
Reviewed By: Ark The Lad On: May 09, 2002 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty good, I enjoy reading this again. It's great that you have expanded you horizons by submitting your fic to other sites, this is an incredible story, I look forward to reading more I just love this fic completely orginal keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Kiki (Vegeta189) On: May 26, 2002 17:22 CDT
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I so sorry brother I use your account, I didn't mean to I hope nobody thinks you reviewed yourself I logged you out now, so evertything should be okay, you request to remove it, basically I said that this was a unique story and I have not read anything like and I used my other nam Vegeta 189 sighs I'm sorry I didn't know give me break I was trying to be nice dork! and I want more of this story now! |
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