| "The Perfect Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kandy On: October 09, 2002 17:53 CDT
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Misty is quite a character. Oh my goosh, I'm tearing up. NOBODY has every made Nappa, a some what decent guy. And now this some what decent guy is gone. Why? That's so-wait...Is that what Shin's dream was about? Vegeta tranfomation, no words. You made him go crazy. I'm a keep lovin' this... |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: October 09, 2002 17:52 CDT
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Poor Nappa, I think you made me like him. Now I'm gonnna be depressed. Bulma talks to much, can't something bad happen to her? Damn. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: October 09, 2002 17:52 CDT
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Goku has finally cursed. The world IS ending. The sad truth, I feel just the way he does. Except about the whole death part, I'd rather be a vegetable. They are so stupid! |
Reviewed By: Sheena On: October 03, 2002 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You capture all emotions I could think of and I love the way you have stretched out the romance of Bulma and Vegeta not jumping each other straight away like other authors have done. But the best is the way you inserted twists into the story I never guessed that the boy was Trunks you put me in shock when I found out. Expecially when I saw that clues were there all along (how could I of missed them) Great story Very Original and Enjoyable This may suprise you but I'm normally a strict reviewer but your story IS fantastic making me hang out for more.
So Get to it ASAP!!!!
By the way you made me crack up so bad when Vegeta and Zarbon were discussing the prospect of Trunks being gay and also how Trunks was moving his ass quick silver to get away from the unwanted attention of the gay dudes lol.
Don't stop and I mean it!!!! |
Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 15:45 CDT
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Oooooh this is such a great fic! Please Please Please update real soon! |
Reviewed By: the Angel of Death 87 On: September 24, 2002 12:07 CDT
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Me again!! I think it's really scary...the 80's!!
Anywayz...Nice story!! And I don't have to ask who's the father of Trunks I guess. Well, when does Vegeta find out about Trunks?
Well, I'm not gonna bother you with my shit-story, but keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: plfs On: November 03, 2002 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very very very funny, good story |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 10:25 CDT
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write more!! write more!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 02:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
2:19am, this was funny, I'm going to bed. But this chapter was really hilarous. I'm a keep on lovin' it. :) |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Most people are scared of the dark, I am scared of worms. I think I'll be staying up a little bit later. I recoilded in digust when I read this-good job. Very descriptive. But, when ChiChi & Krillin were talking, I was cracking up. Espically when she was talking about the meat, yamcha, and Gohan's studies. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 01:27 CDT
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Lovely AN, now I have something to look forward too. I was about to get really sad, I thought you had let ChiChi die. I wouldn't had been sad if ChiChi had died, just sad for Goku, and a tid bit for her. Any who, I like it. I love and I really enjoy reading it at 1:27am in the morning. Toodles. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 00:54 CDT
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Bravo, that author's note was so appropriate. Not "usely" information, or blabber. Lovely. For a second, I thought that Vegeta wouldn't be strong enough to blast threw the cell. What the hell was I thinking? Any who, wonderful work, no spelling/grammar errors, creative as always, and I enjoyed it. Even though it's 12:34am. Next chapter... |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, I read that before. That was so sad, he just left them. Horrible. I like it. Next chapter. Oh, and I put the wrong title for the last review. Opps... |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 00:38 CDT
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Have I reviewed lately? ~scrolls down~No I haven't. Well, I'm reviewing now. The begininging(?) (and the end,)but the starting line is very beautiful. I love it. Next chapter. |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 10:12 CDT
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Hi!! I hope you don't mind that I post so much reviews, but I really like this story!! It has a good story line, and I wanna know how it'll continue!! By the way...nice pictures you've drawed!!! |
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