"The Perfect Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel Wings [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 15:45 CDT Comment/Review: Oooooh this is such a great fic! Please Please Please update real soon! |
Reviewed By: the Angel of Death 87 On: September 24, 2002 12:07 CDT Comment/Review: Me again!! I think it's really scary...the 80's!!
Anywayz...Nice story!! And I don't have to ask who's the father of Trunks I guess. Well, when does Vegeta find out about Trunks?
Well, I'm not gonna bother you with my shit-story, but keep up the good work!! |
Reviewed By: plfs On: November 03, 2002 00:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: very very very funny, good story |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 10:25 CDT Comment/Review: write more!! write more!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 02:19 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: 2:19am, this was funny, I'm going to bed. But this chapter was really hilarous. I'm a keep on lovin' it. :) |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 01:53 CDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Most people are scared of the dark, I am scared of worms. I think I'll be staying up a little bit later. I recoilded in digust when I read this-good job. Very descriptive. But, when ChiChi & Krillin were talking, I was cracking up. Espically when she was talking about the meat, yamcha, and Gohan's studies. Good job. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 01:27 CDT Comment/Review: Lovely AN, now I have something to look forward too. I was about to get really sad, I thought you had let ChiChi die. I wouldn't had been sad if ChiChi had died, just sad for Goku, and a tid bit for her. Any who, I like it. I love and I really enjoy reading it at 1:27am in the morning. Toodles. |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 00:54 CDT Comment/Review: Bravo, that author's note was so appropriate. Not "usely" information, or blabber. Lovely. For a second, I thought that Vegeta wouldn't be strong enough to blast threw the cell. What the hell was I thinking? Any who, wonderful work, no spelling/grammar errors, creative as always, and I enjoyed it. Even though it's 12:34am. Next chapter... |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 00:40 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Yeah, I read that before. That was so sad, he just left them. Horrible. I like it. Next chapter. Oh, and I put the wrong title for the last review. Opps... |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: September 02, 2002 00:38 CDT Comment/Review: Have I reviewed lately? ~scrolls down~No I haven't. Well, I'm reviewing now. The begininging(?) (and the end,)but the starting line is very beautiful. I love it. Next chapter. |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2002 10:12 CDT Comment/Review: Hi!! I hope you don't mind that I post so much reviews, but I really like this story!! It has a good story line, and I wanna know how it'll continue!! By the way...nice pictures you've drawed!!! |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 14:04 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: wow!! Nice!! That was a really good chapter!! I want to know how it continues with vegeta!!
I hope the next chapter comes soon!! |
Reviewed By: yamikaiba8764 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2002 11:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: well dude you could tell i like this rating make more MAKE MORE |
Reviewed By: Trunks Serenity Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 14:45 CDT Comment/Review: keep on writing its getting good!!!! |
Reviewed By: the Angel of death 87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2002 09:29 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: this is really a great and orriginal story. I love it and I'm waiting for the next chapter. 'cause I like to know how it continues. I'ts a great peace of work and keep up the good work!! |
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