| "A Killer In Hindsight" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Title: OOH! Romantic already!
Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 17:33 CDT
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They just met and they're already thinking about each other! Yay InuYasha and Kagome! I still can't really tell what you changed. I just can't tell the difference! LOL! Keep up the good work! ;D
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Title: Doing My Happy Dance!
Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 17:39 CDT
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HURRAY FOR HAPPY DANCES! I see Kagome has one of her own too. You did a good job revising! And I got the joke (it was a joke, right?) She did have a nice set of...cookies? LOL! Great job A.J. I hope to have my story up soon. :D
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2007 09:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank God u updated. now wouldya do it again? thank u very much ;P
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SOOOOOOOORRRRRRYYYYY i didnt review earlier >.< i had it in my head until something happen T-T hey can u check my amv?? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=beAx5MmZMtc anyways sorry once again!!! from ya #1 fan rach big kisses!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 16:01 CDT
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I'm done! I'm now happily waiting for you to update! I'm not worried though because you're sooo good about it! Looking forward to seeing it!
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Title: Yeah fluff!
Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 16:56 CDT
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HURAY!!!!! You put in some more fluff!!!! I'm sooooo happy!!!!!! One more chapter and I'll be all caught up! WOOHOO!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 02:23 CDT
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Damn Naraku is such a sick bastard! Again you did a good job on everything but I hadn't thought Naraku was THAT sick (at least in the series anyway). And again I really like it so far. I'm glad you put a tiny bit of fluff in it and that made me feel a little better. I'm sorry. I'll try not to write a review for every chapter I read (I'm sooooo far behind!). But its hard not to compliment you for a job well done! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Koolkat191 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2007 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I wouldn't be surprised if you ended up writing a horror movie one day. The detail of all of the toture and stuff was depressing but very very well written. Let's just say it wasn't all that hard to picture...but I'll continue reading I just had to say something about that part. I hope you get back to the fluff in the next chapters soon. I'm starting to really miss it.
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Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 21:25 CDT
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I'm a little confused about the timeline of your story. At the beginning of chapter three, you say "It had been a week since one, Kagome Higurashi, had joined the crew of the Tetsusiaga." This is the day that the storm begins; if I've been reading correctly, the storm lasts less than a day. They spend one night on the island... Meaning they only left the port a week and a half prior to the events in Chapter 12. If Kagome was told that they were going to be at sea in the range of 4-5 months, then why are they worrying about rationing food? And if Kagome did indeed neglect to buy enough provisions at the store before they left...why didn't InuYasha say anything besides "Where's the meat?" As a fairly experienced fisherman, he should have known that the food she bought wasn't going to last more than two weeks, let alone 4-5 months. I don't know if I've missed something major, or if you didn't consider this incongruency, but it'll make your story a little more realistic if you straighten it out.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 15:59 CDT
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okay for some odd reason im not getting any chapters after twelve i think i might know whats wrong but umm.... do you think you could check and see if anythigns wrong. thnxs, hope to read it ALL soon, laters, HOWL_TO_THE _DARKMOON
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 05:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DARN IT! Now they really are stuck. How in the world are they supposed to get off the island now?! This story is excellent, but I'm pulling my hair out here. I just hope that they can get out of this. Because now they HAVE to go through Naraku in order to survive. What a mess. Good job.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 03:50 CDT
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awwww u got a new name!!! yay i like it ^^ and *gasp* havent talked to u in YONKS!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 16:29 CDT
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An excellently written story!! I thoroughly enjoyed reading, and am looking forward to your next chapter. I do love how you made Naraku out to be the bastard he is...mwahahahhaa his role fits in so nicely....and hmmmm I wonder just what Kagome's part is in destroying him! XD Also..hahaha Kagura is helping because she's sleeping with Bankotsu....kidding!! But of course, I'm anxious to see where this is going, so great job and keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 14:19 CDT
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UPDATEUPDATEUPDATEUPDATE. i love this fic so u have to update soon. and i think it is a little loss of love between kags and inu. plz let it be some love again. and u'r title, what about: A Island of Nightmare's
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 08:10 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thnx hun ^^ GREAT pressie ^^ and i hope you feel better soon!!!!!!! and *cough* i feel old lol anyways update soon of course ^^ when you can ^^ ill talk to ya laters big kisses from ya #1 fan rach
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