| "A Killer In Hindsight" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 16:45 CST
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good.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. I guess you were posting this one as I wrote the review for the last one, LOL. Nice twist with the shipwreck....this sounds interesting. And I loved the Inu/Kag fluff (even though it was necessarily brief). I can't wait to see what's going on with this island. I'm looking forward to reading more soon. Excellent story.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 13:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I just started reading it with the latest chapter, and I LOVE what I've read so far. Your story is very original....and a lot of fun. I really like how Inuyasha and Kagome are depicted here. They are gonna be so cute together! I look forward to reading more soon. Good job.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 00:29 CST
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I have to say this story is more than just a pleasure to read. It's very well written and hardly any errors (bonus points for you!). I love the amount of detail you use. I can tell how much time and thought you put into your work and it most certainly will show to anyone who knows good writing when they see it. All of your characters seem to be well rounded. I think Koga was more than a bit brash and forward but I suppose you needed to make him a little extreme to get him out of the way. You were sly in the way you went about weaseling out of explaining/describing the crew's work jobs and fishing activities. But I suppose that going into the details of Kagome's job and the recipes will definitly be a task. I like the pace you have given this story. No one is hot and heavy in lust or they are so timid that things drag on forever. I wish I could ask some questions like - How does Inuyasha treat his human night in this story since there is no real reason he needs to hide? What does Shippo get out of pushing them together? Or when does Sango actually spend time with Kagome? While I would like to get answers to these questions my brain tells me that I will have to sit and wait to find out the answers that will surly appear at one point or another in this story. Also the bit about her being a chef for a vegitarian couple was charming. It explained why she chose the ingredients she did, much to Inuyasha's horror. Which did make me snicker, so like a man to focus on just meat. I see you have made Hojo a non-romantic contestant which in the long run might be safer. Though Koga can stand to irritate Yash and live I'm sure Hojo would not survive the wrath of an annoyed hanyou. This story is truly a delectable delicacy. I hope to read more of it soon. Oh I almost forgot. I you asked how to spell Tetsusaiga but I do believe you spelled it right.
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Reviewed By: cbm1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I LOVE it! Update soon please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 19:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story so far .i wi=ould really like to find out what happens next. if not soon , soon enough. its good and i like ur story plz continue.
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Reviewed By: yeahsurewhateverrr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 02:22 CST
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i like this story. it`s so cute (: update soon please?
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Reviewed By: bobby pin On: November 20, 2006 12:02 CST
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Hi. Glad to see you update. Inu-chan's sword is tessaiga, or at least that's from the adinuyasha translation anyway. I really like this story but you should maybe break the paragraphs a little, making it easier on the eyes. Big paragraphs are really a pain to read. Hope to see you update again soon and I'd love to see the recipe!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 07:31 CST
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:pve it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: something new On: November 20, 2006 04:55 CST
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this is a really good story.........it is definitely an original concept and i cant wait for more........
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Reviewed By: bobby pin On: November 19, 2006 11:35 CST
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Nice. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter :)
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: November 19, 2006 10:14 CST
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YEAH im your..umm..second reviewer awsome, i can't wait until the next chapter, this story is so good i can't wait, keep up the good work. love secret
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Reviewed By: bbbeleana On: November 19, 2006 09:33 CST
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nice.....love to see more of it :D maybe you could have more paragraphs, please? ja ne!
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