| "A Killer In Hindsight" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 08:16 CST
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Naraku, I'll fucking killyou!!!!!!!!! stop fucking messing with Inuyasha!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2007 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i like this story! hopeing you do bring Sesshy in ^^ but i cant wait to see the sparks fly between Inuyasha and Kagome hehehehe but i like where this is going :D
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Reviewed By: AmiFire Chopstixx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lovveeee itt!!! I hope you update sooon! I can't wait to find out what happens nexxtt!!!! AHHH update plz
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 22:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. But Naraku is one SICK, TWISTED bastard. I really hope they can stop him before it's too late. With a foe like him, it is definitely kill or be killed. I just hope that they are up to the challenge. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 19:57 CST
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i really like this story. good job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: January 22, 2007 23:15 CST
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Awesome story. it reminds me of lost/ giligans island. its kool great plot. Ok update soon and could you please send me the recipes??? my email is tiffany@myfarm.net
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 01:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. This story is getting more interesting by the minute. Now that Inuyasha and his crew have combined with Ayame's group, maybe it will make it easier to figure out what's going on. Hiten and Jinenji are in a LOT of trouble. On a lighter note, Jakotsu should add some needed humor to this story by flirting with an uninterested (and easily embarrassed) Inuyasha. If Inuyasha allows him to live long enough that is, LOL. As for Sessh, I'll miss him, but the story is just fine without him. I look forward to reading more soon.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 16:18 CST
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Wow. Wonderful. You know what? It is kinda funny to see that this has just been updated after reading it over and over for about...three days. Really messes you up. Oh well. Can't wait to get the next chapter, and just so you know, I'm almost done editing the first five chapters. Yeah. LoL. ~Shadow
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 06:34 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this sounds like trouble. I hope they can get to Jinenji in time. And that darned Naraku.....I REALLy hope they kill him soon. But I wouldn't bet on it. I do wonder, though, is Sesshomaru going to be in this story? I hope so, especially if he is instrumental in saving the crew from the island. I can just imagine how "grateful" Inuyasha would be....unless Sessh is NICE for some reason.....Nah! LOL. Oh, well, just me rambling. I just like Sesshomaru that's all. But this story is very good even without him. I look forward to seeing where you go next.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 03:41 CST
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Update soon!!! Please? It's really good.
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 21:55 CST
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Wow when I said I hoped to see the update soon I didn't know it would be this soon. Usually I have to wait. And there were two lovely chapters just waiting for me to devour! And I am flattered that my review had such an effect on you. I know how important reviews are but it's always nice to hear it. I like that you spotlighted Jin. He really is a great character. I'm glad we got to know him a little better in your story. You even gave him a wife! Poor thing totally desevers happiness. I wasn't going to bring up his human day since you said he is a loner but you put in there that he helps the crew sometimes. Since he is human during the day it will be a lot harder on him to hide it IF that is what he does in this story. Plus the big guy is captured. I thought you were going to have whom ever got deserted steal their ship and leave them I honestly didn't expect anyone to get abducted. That was a complete twist that I just wasn't looking for. I wonder who was the "nice" person that tied them to the tree. If the owner of the island didn't want them there then no one that works for him would have bothered to do it. An undetected stow away perhaps? Is it Ayame? I'm just guessing her since you said that she will be in the story and she has yet to appear. I just cann't see her firey spirit being suppressed by Naraku. So she doesn't work for him right? Meanwhile I haven't the slightest idea what Jin is supposed to be bait for. Maybe if we all ask really nicely you will just tell us?...It was worth a shot. And I see you address Miroku and Sango's "couple" issue as well as let Sango and Kagome have their girl time. It seems you are trying to build up future scenes from their conversation. Slipping little tid bits of info on Sango and helping Kagome understand Yash. Oh, while I'm thinking about it is Jin his usual mammoth size? Because I don't think he could fit in that small bunker if he was. So did you down grade him for your story? I might have to try those grilled cheese sandwiches. They sound good. I think I imagined them too tasty because I made myself hungry.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 16:20 CST
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Cool update. Poor Jinenji, don't kill him!!! *runs around screaming* *looks at all the people giving her weird looks* Um..yeah. I'm a loner as well, so don't worry. I won't be harsh, much. LoL. When I write I tend to get moody, depends on what is happening in the story. ^^; I'm still up for it and I'll try my best. If you ever need help with any ideas, I'll help as well...and yeah. 'Til then ~Shadow
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Title: Recipes!
Reviewed By: Assassin_Chiq [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol stories great, grammar could be better (sorry) but the funky food is even better ;) I really like where you decided to take the story. I didn't know where you'd go with it after the storm but having them "meet" Naraku is a great idea! lol anyway I fear I have a hidden motive to this review. I was wondering if I could get the recipes for the Kitchen sink cookies and the whipped hot chocolate. They sound delish! Umm my email is assassin_chiq@msn.com so gimme a shout and maybe you'll give me a hint about where your going with the story ... *wink wink nudge nudge* lol! Thanks again and great story. Look forward to talkin to ya!
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 09:25 CST
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it's a really good story! a little something deeper might be needed, when dealing with people's emotions, but otherwise, a really captivating story =^.^= also...the grammar...but seems like you've got it under control, ne? *i read the shadow demons heart's offer :)*anyway! update!
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 20:16 CST
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Pretty good. I've just read it and I must say I haven't seen another idea like this one. I like it. I like how you made everyone's personalities. Yeah...lol, Hojo wet his pants. Thats just rich. You said that you are looking for a beta? I would be willing to help you out. I haven't really done a beta work for anyones main work, but I beta my own writings and no one has complained about my grammar. Personally I think you arn't doing to bad a job with grammar and stuff. But hey, if you are willing to give me a shot, I'll take the job. ~Shadow
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