| "Luck" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: QundraDraconum [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 03:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought this was very well done. It's not like a normal pokegirl fic and shows good originality and promise. The only problem I had with the story was when Satsuma attached the collar. Right there was a direct betrayal of his very limited trust, but all he does is growl? It didn't seem to fit with the character you'd been building, and really through me off. Other than that, good job.
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Reviewed By: Sharktooth [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 23:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really interesting fanfic. you have real talent for this. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2007 16:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoying it a lot update soon =)
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