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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 19, 2002 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Veggie looks like he's got this virus real bad. I love the scene between him and Bulma in the thread room. Oh and the piggy pill threat was rich. I can just picture Piccolo with the "hershey squirts" times ten ^_^. That was a little comic relief in the middle of all this angst. I almost forgot about the other voice till you mentioned it. Dammit you're driving me crazy! Hurry up and update before I get a brain bleed. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 19, 2002 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, there's a pleasant change. For once it's Veggie that has a virus and not Goku. I'm glad the Hitori are gone and I hope Bulma is able to help Veggie get better. Curious to know what happened those 3 years and what type of virus wiped out the Hitori. Great chap as always ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Meow On: June 17, 2002 13:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O This has got to be the best freaking action/drama...whatever fic I've EVER read. I am literally on the EDGE on my seat. And believe me, that's not easy for an author to do...at least not to me anyway...usually when authors say "Pretty mean cliffhanger huh? I'm so evil HAHAHAHA" I just kinda roll my eyes and am like..whatever it's not THAT interesting, but this is really good. Now I am not saying that I am some kind of amazing critic or something, but it really takes a good story to get my attention like this. This is just amazing so far. That's all I can think of to say. Sorry, I'm just really bad at giving constructive reviews. This is GREAT. This is WAY more interesting than anything that happened in the actual show. (after the freeza saga anyway..this is so what should have happened...forget all that stupid android/cell crap!) Keep up the good work. I'm EAGERLY awaiting the next amazingly action/drama packed chapter! O_O;; |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess On: June 14, 2002 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
oh! too cool i loved this fic! ^_^ i wanna read more. can i read more? hehe thx
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 14, 2002 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. So the Namek messed with Veggie and "lost" his head...*ahem* sorry. Okay, so everyone's alive and Veggie left. Where is Veggie headed to and what are the Z senshi and Bulma gonna do while he's gone? Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks once* *looks twice* What the *beep*!
Vegeta: O.O! Onna! I'm surprised at you.
ssjprincess: *sighs* I'm sorry, Vegeta. I guess it's a result of being around you so long.
Vegeta: Well, what the *beep* is your problem, Onna?
ssjprincess: See what I mean. Anyway, I'm just a bit annoyed at ff.n. I had a nice review placed for Chapter 6 already, but it never showed up after I submitted it. Then as I was checking to see if it showed up earlier all I got was user does not exist, and story not found. I wanted to scream, but then ff.n crashed, so I thought oh well, that must have been the problem. But here I am now and still no review. *growls*
Vegeta: O.o Onna, maybe this is too obvious for you, but just write another review. *mutters* baka.
ssjprincess: All right, I will. :)
First off, How could you do that? That chapter was too short! Extremely short compared to your normally *long* chapters. :)
I'm glad that the evil force behind the Hitori has been defeated, and that Vegeta has been partially returned. But, how can he leave? How can he just leave Bulma behind?! *BAM!*
Vegeta: OW! *rubs head* What the hell was that for?
ssjprincess: For leaving Bulma behind!
Vegeta: O.o;; Onna, you're getting far to caught up in this fic.
ssjprincess: How can I not? This fic is excellent.
Vegeta: May I make a suggestion for this fic?
ssjprincess: No.
Vegeta: May I suggest that in furure chapter you have me purge planet, destroy millions, and become Supreme Ruler of the universe. *smirks*
ssjprincess: *blink* *blink blink* Yep, that's going to happen. *rolls her eyes* I have a suggestion too. Get a new chapter out soon! :) I love this fic. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Oh before I go one more thing. I'm still waiting for a new chapter for Dimensions of You. :) |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2002 13:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay so I was reading this over at Fanfiction.net and it said that chapter six isn't found. Just thought I'd let you know so you can fix it.
Now that was a great chapter! I wonder what answers his looking for and where will he find them. I hope he comes back soon. *sigh*
Well 'til next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Re-o-ko On: June 10, 2002 17:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! i just can't wait till you post up the next chapter!!!! I hope there's even more B/V!!!! |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2002 20:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awsome... I like the way this is heading...keep up the work! |
Reviewed By: xangeliz91487x [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2002 19:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
cute...very...funny too...i like the way this is shaping up...lol. ciao |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 04, 2002 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. So it looks like Bulma and company have come up with a plan. I don't know why, but I have a bad feeling that things will not turn out the way they want. That voice, well I was thinking that maybe it would belong to King Vegeta but I'm probably wrong. I'm glad I've read this before going to bed...maybe I'll have some nightmares and liven things up a bit ^_^. Awesome story, can't wait for more-Sue |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 04, 2002 02:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, I don't know what to say. This is awesome. I saw the pic for the story and Veggie looks so eerie with those metallic eyes *shudders*. At least he isn't completely under their control cause he didn't take Bulma or Goku. Is that Bulma's voice he hears at the end of the chapter? Guess I'll have to read on to find out. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 04, 2002 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa these spiderlike thingies are too wierd. Hitori huh? If I remember my Japanese, I think it means "one person". Yeah, I recall the bot saying something to that effect. Funny that it seems to know what Veggie wants. Ok I need more info, so I'll go on to chap 3. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 04, 2002 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing! One question, what are you on and where can I get some? My dreams are so boring they're not worth remembering and here you've come up with this incredible twilight zonish fic. What the hell are those things? What are they telling Veggie? What do they want with him? Where do they come from? How in the hell did I miss story when it was first posted? Oh, I see there are more chapters...nevermind, I'll just read on. You got this from a dream? Wow! |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2002 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story... keep it going |
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