| "Unexplainables" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 04, 2002 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa these spiderlike thingies are too wierd. Hitori huh? If I remember my Japanese, I think it means "one person". Yeah, I recall the bot saying something to that effect. Funny that it seems to know what Veggie wants. Ok I need more info, so I'll go on to chap 3. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 04, 2002 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing! One question, what are you on and where can I get some? My dreams are so boring they're not worth remembering and here you've come up with this incredible twilight zonish fic. What the hell are those things? What are they telling Veggie? What do they want with him? Where do they come from? How in the hell did I miss story when it was first posted? Oh, I see there are more chapters...nevermind, I'll just read on. You got this from a dream? Wow! |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2002 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story... keep it going |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 02, 2002 19:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
well yikes! oh no! vegeta won't be vegeta-esque anymore! brainwashing is bad! hitori are thought nazis! i like your story, yup.
mindless chatter:
mmmm, brainfreezy. i could go for one right now. i won't kill anyone for it either, i promise. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 10, 2002 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was excellent! I don't know why the voice is namekian but who cares. Eventually all will be explained. Is Yamcha okay? Will Veggie "possess" Bulma? What's gonna happen to the other Z fighters? As always, I can't wait for the answers, so update asap ok? |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 29, 2002 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow... that was... REALLY GOOD. incredible actually. holey jeez, i'm even more confused but i'm loving every minute! keep it up!
Scary vegeta cyborg thingy... ugh... *shivers* extreme creepiness... neeto indeed! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I never! How dare you threaten my Goten and -most importantly- my Trunks in such a way! *walks away from the computer and yells out her back door* Yamucha! Yamucha get in here this minute!
Vegeta: He's not coming.
JB: *frowns* Why not?
Vegeta: *shrug* He's afraid of her.
JB: *grunts* Stupid, no good, weak, human coward! If he's afraid of her just wait till I get my hands on him.
Anyway, this was such an absolutely freakin' awesome chapter!!!!!! You're right. I'm not too happy about what they did to him but I'm glad to see that Vegeta's still in there somewhere. I love that he refuses to take her. It's soooo sweet! I want to know what's up with that other voice. Darn it! Stop with the evil cliffes!
I can not believe you forgot that you killed Goten! Honestly Kahlan, you're getting like me with this forgetting lost fics stuff! What would Vegeta say about that? *shakes head disapprovingly*
Vegeta: He wouldn't care about a story.
JB: SHUT UP VEGETA! Nobody was talking to you!
Vegeta: *scowls* You'll regret that.
JB: *rolls eyes* Promises, promises.
Well I guess I'll go torture Veggie more in one of my comedies. I'm feeling very funny today *winks*.-JB |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's a good outlook. If you can't explain it, get rid of it. I'm going to have to try that sometimes. I'm interested in these 'voices' I can't wait to find out more about them!! |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
D*** it!! why, this doesn't make any sense. You've got to write another chapter, so I can know what's going on! Oh by the way, I like it. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2002 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again another great chapter. But you already knew that. I can't wait to see what these Hiroit (I forgot how to spell it already. Sorry ^_^) have in store for my Veggie.
Ahhhhhhh!!! He likes her! You know what I like best about your fics? Quick V/B action! There is always some kind of sweet/romantic/humorous V/B action within the first two chapters of your stories but it never seems like you rush it. That's some talent you've got.
Yes I know it took me a long ime to review but I had to update The Show since it's been like a month since the last time I did. Speaking of long updates where is S:WW? And most importantly DOY? *crosses arms vegeta style and taps foot impatiently* I'm waiting...-JB
Oh, and in My Friend yes Jay is short for Juuanangou.
oh, oh! And as for Yamucha...*smirks evilly and walks away thinking of new ways to enter Yamucha in Kahlan Nightwing's review.* |
Reviewed By: masamune On: May 16, 2002 22:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
eeeep! those robot things sound really scary and proby-like; that's never good. no, probiness never sounds good. (i like the word probe, can you tell?)
i have absolutely no idea what could happen next! that's wierd, because i usually have an idea when i'm reading a story, but i'm totally perplexed! you're an incredible writer! |
Reviewed By: Lupin Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME START! Very nicely done and it already has a lot of twists in it. You have a very unique style. Can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I mean...WOW! This is going to be sooooooo cool! Where do you think up these things?! I can't wait to see what happens next. Well off to update...well something... What do you guys think I should update? *looks to her right*
Bulma: Oh! Oh! Oh! Update When You Least Expect! I luuuve that story!
JB: I just updated that Bulma.
Trunks: Well what about The Group?
JB: Sorry kid but it's just not getting enough reviews.
Krillin: I like Willpower *chuckles evilly and recieves a smile from 18*
V/G, V/B, G/CC: NO!!!!!
Gohan: Well what about The Show?
JB: *taps chins* Hmm...That maybe plausible. Thank you Gohan. Any other ideas?
ChiChi: I like My Friend.
JB: So do I! Matter of fact it's my fav. but the next chapter going be kind of long (for me anyway) and I don't feel like typing that much tonight.
Yamucha: Well what about Relationships?
JB: Uh...no. Anyone else?
Goten: What about the Great Shopping Adventure? It's kind of funny. *recieves growl from Vegeta* Uh...nevermind.
JB: *sighs* Gosh you guys don't know anything! Vegeta, what do you think?
Vegeta: *shrugs* Update whatever you want, either way it'll be about me so it's bound to be good.
JB: *smiles bright* You're a genius Vegeta! Why didn't I just ask you in the first place?
Vegeta: *shrugs*
-JB |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
What a nice way to have them break-up. I really like, and I can't wait to find out about these aliens/robots. Bye |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 12, 2002 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh, this is really good! and very original. i love it. please continue more, this is soooo interesting! |
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