"Unexplainables" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 00:46 CST Comment/Review: AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! you are truely evil..... no you can't end it there you much continue! aaaarggg...... pleeeeeeeeassssse *begs really nicely* |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 10:36 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: What the ???
Why in the heck did I miss this chapter?
Ugh! I think I have been caught in some sort of temporal loop. Why do I always miss updates? Ugh!
Vegeta: *rolls his eyes*
ssjprincess: *sighs and shakes her head* Oh well, I guess I'll have to read this chapter so I can start the sequel. *rubs her hands together in anticipation* So on with the review....
Wow! What insightful words! And they came from the mouth of...Goku? lol :)
*falls over from the shocking ending*
Vegeta: O.o Maybe I should check on her? *shrugs* I'm sure she's fine.
ssjprincess: *stands up and dusts herself off* Geez, Vegeta! Your concern is overwhelming.
Vegeta: *smirks*
ssjprincess: But back to the point! Oh my Kami!! How could you end it like that?! That was extremely cruel of you.
Vegeta: *smirks and gives you a thumbs up*
ssjprincess: He had better make the right wish! Or so help me, *pulls out the frying pan* this will be permenatlly attached to Vegeta's skull.
Truthfully, this was an excellent fic, and I can't wait to start the sequel. :) And yes, I came up with that theory all on my own. *gives you a big cheesy grin*
Vegeta: She's obviously been eating the same thing that Kakarott has. They've both suddenly grown brain cells. *smirks*
ssjprincess: *narrows her eyes at Vegeta* Let's see if you can suddenly grow a lump. *swings her frying pan at Vegeta's head*
Vegeta: *chuckles and ducks*
ssjprincess: *misses continues to spin in a circle causing herself to fall on her tush*
Vegeta: *chuckles*
ssjprincess: *sighs* Well, of to the sequel I go. :) |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 01:19 CDT Comment/Review: *makes a little circle* no new story...*walks to next fic* |
Reviewed By: SkittleKicks On: July 11, 2002 07:32 CDT Comment/Review: ARG! *goes stomping off* NEW STORY, NOW! |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 01:36 CDT Comment/Review: oh you so cant stop there! WHAT's his wish? you have to write a sequal, or something so that i can find out what happens, and he so better not stay as a hitori! oh but i loved this as well, you are one of my fav authors, keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Kandy On: July 02, 2002 11:11 CDT Comment/Review: It's ended all ready? I just started so soon ago. Okay maybe that didn't make any sense, but know I have to go read it. I'll drop a review after every chapter, don't worry. |
Reviewed By: Rae George [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2002 01:14 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Gods, you'd better get this new story out quick...
...If Vegeta wishes for anything other than to be normal again, I hope Bulma bitch-slaps him. Seriously, dude. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 01:22 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That is soooo messed up! How can you just leave us hanging like that?!?!?! You had better have this new story out quick or I'll...well I'll...I mean I'll... Shit! Vegeta do you have any idea?
Vegeta: None legal.
Oh well...just get it out all right. Great, wonderful, awesome, terrific (see I'm using my thesaurus ^_~) fic. Can't wait for the next part. You know I'll be reading.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 29, 2002 03:17 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was excellent. You have redeemed yourself, but I MUST HAVE MORE!!! I can't wait to find out what Veggie wished for. At least Bulma is alive again. Great job KN!!! |
Reviewed By: valeyard [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 01:41 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is frickin' great!
I've only got through a few chapters so far, but I am so glued to this!
Have to read it all! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 28, 2002 22:32 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was one crazy non-ending!the suspense is truely terrible! you're so cruel! (hee hee... sadist... it's a funny word. it sounds so evil...)
yay! it's not really over yet. there's just so much left to explain to certain persons who MUST know!
oh, and the ending was really good, but knowing you've got the sequel up in the wings made it all the better! (that phrase doesn't sound particularly right to me grammatically speaking, but you get the point!) |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 15:38 CDT Comment/Review: hmmm....somehow two reviews got there. You can delete the first one and chalk it up to my emotional state caused by you! Sorry um... okay I'll go now. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 15:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *sniff* *sob* *wail* I-I *deep shuttering breath* Just hold on and give me a minute. *blows nose loudly* How could you- I mean- Why?! Why do you keep killing off- *is overwhelmed by her grief* You know I just can't talk to you about this right now. I have to go and console Veggie because I know he's just- well...inconsolable at this moment.
Vegeta: Not really.
JB: Yes you are! You're just trying to hide your feelings.
Vegeta: Really I'm perfectly all right. It's a story Jadedbest. I'm sure if you go read AD the woman will be perfectly healthy.
JB: *sniffs* All right, that's just what I'll do. And she better be okay when I get there, too. *glares at Kahlan Nightwing*-JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 15:34 CDT Comment/Review: *sniff* *sob* *wail* I-I *deep shuttering breath* Just hold on and give me a minute. *blows nose loudly* How could you- I mean- Why?! Why do you keep killing off- *is overwhelmed by her grief* You know I just can't talk to you about this right now. I have to go and console Veggie because I know he's just- well...inconsolable at this moment.
Vegeta: Not really.
JB: Yes you are! You're just trying to hide your feelings.
Vegeta: Really I'm perfectly all right. It's a story Jadedbest. I'm sure if you go read AD the woman will be perfectly healthy.
JB: *sniffs* All right, that's just what I'll do. And she better be okay when I get there, too. *glares at Kahlan Nightwing*-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 26, 2002 12:46 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Holy Sh*t! I can't believe you killed Bulma! This is a lousy way to get your jollies, but masochist that I am I will still continue to read this great story in hopes that you will redeem yourself. No I'm not angry, I just want to cry. Poor Bulma gave her life up for the man she loves, and I think it's just dawning on Veggie that he felt more for her than he cared to admit. So now that I'm thoroughly depressed I'm gonna go read LPP again for a good laugh. Don't take too long in updating this, ok? |
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