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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Ditany [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2008 08:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say, your story is one of those stories you know you will want to read again and again. It is a work of art. Thank you.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2008 22:54 CDT
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especially after the last manga chapter this is particularly apropos. see, you saw the future! so sweet, the insistence of being there for the birth, the tender, solicitous, doting while she was in labor. the feelings you portrayed as he considered his son and mate... breathtaking. ~ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: inuyashaluvskagome909 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED THIS ONE SHOT IT WAS TOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!! VERY RARE INSIGHT AS TO HOW INUYASHA WOULD FEEL ABOUT THE BIRTH OF HIS CHILD BUT I HAVETO SAY THAT YOU KEPT ALL OF THEM IN CHARACTER SOOOO WELL THAT I ACTUALLY THOUGHT THAT THIS WAS PART OF THE MANGA THAT I WAS READING~~~~~~~~~~ GOOD JOB I LOVED IT!!!
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Reviewed By: jasmine-lotus On: March 26, 2008 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
By the end of the fic I was clasping my hand together and desperately trying not to cry. It was just so incredibly beautiful. The way you described Inuyasha's wonder and joy was heart melting. Thank You so much for sharing this extraordianry piece of writing with us. :)
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Reviewed By: Aurelia Lothlorien [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 03:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww. ^-^ Adorable, touching, and completely in character. That was a beauty to read.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet story. That was beautifully written. Inuyasha's emotion was almost tangible here. This is one of the best one-shots I've ever read.
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Reviewed By: Shalini On: April 24, 2007 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very inspiring and uplifting story. There was so much warmth, so much beauty in the way you described the tenderness of Inuyasha's or rather, a father's heart. This was not an ordinary, but an extraordinary story, and you are undoubtedly one of the best writers I have read. Please keep up your good work and the wonderful, insightful writing.
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Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So pleasant^^ It was a really nice read. You offered a good feel about Inu's reaction could/would be to this sort of thing. I love it^^
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Reviewed By: Caitriona [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Beautifully written. You did a wonderful job conveying the awe that Inu feels at the birth of his son. The fact that you didn't even name the baby in a way adds to the feeling of newness and shocked awe. Your first foray into oneshots has been a success. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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Title: moon_lit_serenity
Reviewed By: moon_lit_serenity_22 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful... I mean, awesomely beautiful. I am crying right now. The way you described Inuyasha's warmth and clear affection for Kagome, the completely tender way he loves their son, Kagome's knowing and gentle smiles, the pup's emotions and actions...I loved it, it was absolutley brilliant...
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could have sworn that I reviewed when I read this the first time! Oh well, what's one more? It was wonderful, simply wonderful. I will hunt you down if you ever stop writing!
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Title: paternal instinct
Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
quite beautiful
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Reviewed By: medli [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 09:59 CST
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Wow. I am so suprised about this one-shot. It is simply amazing. Great job on writing it. Look foreward to more of your work!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 01:51 CST
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the January 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/january2007awards/Best-Oneshot-F ic-2nd.jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Jan2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our fifth term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please note that each term we also look for volunteer artists to do the awards, like the one that you are receiving today, and we'd be delighted if you want to help out in that manner (or know someone who does). If you happen to be interested, please send the owner an email at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com stating your interest in helping draw the awards for the next term. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: kt On: January 17, 2007 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
who told you to write such a fic? cuz it was GREAT!!
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