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Reviewed By: NnOoBbOoDdYy On: July 17, 2010 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I really wish that there was a rating above 10.:D
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Reviewed By: naruharemlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 10:42 CDT
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i love it but one thing that distrubs me is that you say that his birthday is the 14 of june but his birthday is actually the 10 of october
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Reviewed By: LaPyro On: December 06, 2008 23:02 CST
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I don't think I'd ever seen this pairing before, but it worked surprisingly well! I liked Tsunade's small involvements and Jiraiya was a wonderful comic relief (as always). In the fifth chapter, je pense que vous devriez dire "On va" ou "Nous avons", au lieu de "On avons". Mais c'est seulement une idee :D
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Title: mmfwcl
Reviewed By: juggalozae On: August 20, 2008 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what up ninja its nice to see another juggalo who enjoys anime/manga like i do.n e way i thought this was a great fic and i enjoyed all the jokes and comments and how you connected to the readers by puting some things about ur life in there but not taking away from the story.great fic keep writing mcl
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Reviewed By: Passerby_Dyl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 02:25 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. Simply amazing. Look foward to reading some of your other work.
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Title: HamsterBattalionCommander
Reviewed By: HamsterBattalionCommander [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the pairing of Naruto with Shizune is certainly new to me, but it was a fairly good fiction anyway. Believeable to a degree. Although I've never heard of somebody 'acidentally' having sex with someone, at least not in broad daylight and without the influence of some sort of mind-altering chemical. And the ass-to-mouth action sorta made me want to kill the nearest living thing in possession of an asshole. (Besides myself, of course.) P.S. Woot! Metallica! Hell yeah.
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Title: more more more
Reviewed By: cree On: August 08, 2007 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wish there were more naruto and shizune stories there great
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Title: more more more
Reviewed By: cree On: August 08, 2007 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wish there were more naruto and shizune stories there great
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Title: more more more
Reviewed By: cree On: August 08, 2007 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i wish there were more naruto and shizune stories there great
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Reviewed By: thebigW [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You seem to be an odd, somewhat eclectic person, and that shows in this fic, which I found when checking out whatever's out there that's got Tsunade in it. Although she's only a supporting cast member here, I like how you handled the main characters. I must say, I wouldn't have figured Shiz/Nar as a couple, but you seemed to have pulled it off to this point, their evolving feelings for one another something I'd like to see more of (and of course the lemony bits as well!). Would have rated higher, but I'm not a fan of writer's comments inserted into the body of the fic itself. Other than that, congrats to you. W.
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Reviewed By: Leviathan_beserker On: April 15, 2007 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great glad you wrote it and sorry to hear about your Dad, but don't let it keep you down keep writing.
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Title: Oddball
Reviewed By: DevilGuy On: April 09, 2007 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey man just discovered this one, I'm a big fan of oddball pairings like this, especially when they're this well written. IMO you should make your NaruXHina fic seperate from this one, and you should continue this one for at least a chapter or two either way, it needs closure, and maybe more sex, yeah more sex would be nice. As it stands this one has a true love sort of feel to it and tying it into a future story with another love interest may not work as well as you think. All in all excelent writing, awsome plotting, characterization, and atmosphere, keep up the good work dude.
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Title: none
Reviewed By: nonenone On: March 30, 2007 07:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the better fics so far (finished 1st 3).
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Title: I'm not Latin.
Reviewed By: The Writer On: February 14, 2007 21:00 CST
Comment/Review:
This is the writer of this fanfic... No, I'm not latin, just a white boy writing a fanfic. I told my English teacher that I was writing on a regular basis and he told me to bring in some of my work. So I let him down easy and basicaly said "That's never going to happen." I enjoy writing these stories, not only because the characterization is already done, and you only need a plot. But because it's alot of fun and it's somewhere I can give my nerdy imaginiation free range and then just pound it out with my keyboard. Thanks for all of your reviews everybody, I'm in the process of writing chapter two of my next piece, it follows the same storyline as Man Training, and it's called "After the Four Tails". I hope you all enjoy! (Go read it now!!!)
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