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| "Naruto of the Mirage" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: halo3128 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story so far and can't wait for the next chapter please keep up with the story a little disappointing on the pairing, I completley understand that naruto/hinata isn't going to be a major part but i mean sasuke with his massive pride admited to himself he like haku somewhat where as naruto seems to not even notice hinata is around. Just a little thing that i saw.
| Reviewed By: sevant of Kyuubi On: January 15, 2007 01:36 CST
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Is this Kyuubi male, female, or neither?
| Reviewed By: sevant of Kyuubi On: January 14, 2007 23:16 CST
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Naruto wouldn't be able to turn them off and they would waste more chackra they usual, like the one Kakashi has.
| Reviewed By: Mark of Chaos On: January 04, 2007 16:15 CST
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im itching to read the next 1 this fic is wiked....that is all i can say Wiked story. how did the idea come 2 u???
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 11:00 CST
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AWESOME!!!! THE THIRD DOESN"T DIE, YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! Okay, I am being hyper, but I REALLY hated seeing the old man die in the fight with Orochimaru, using the Deathgod sealing technique to capture the souls of the First, Second and Orochimaru's arms, that was a necesary, but crappy way to go. Still, I love the story (it is awesome, in a sacrilligeous way, heh) and seeing Naruto do a beatdown on Gaara was well done too. Now if only more good Naru-tales would come out...
| Title: *_* (in shock)
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*_* wow! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! BUT!!! I AM REALLY PISSED OFF THAT THE SNAKE SHIT OCHIMARU PLACED THE CURSE SEAL ON THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! DID YOU REALLY HAVE TO DO THAT?? GGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!! THAT WASN'T NESSESSARY!!!!!!!!!!!!! >< but......... Other than that I love this story but i have one question WHO THE HELL IS GONNA LOVE SASUKE???
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