| "Naruto of the Mirage" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: April 16, 2007 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fiction Please update it soon. I really think you have a good imagination. I want to know whats going to happen hurry and please update.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 23:37 CDT
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Awesome story, and even more awesome, AN EARLY UPDATE!!! WOOT! Okay, now that I've calmed down...I really liked this chapter. Fun, interesting, and showing some new moves, it's pretty cool. Please update soon, ok? Later
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 23:06 CDT
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I love this story but I cann`t wait till you update this and True Hyuuga Genius I gotta know what is going to happen in that story oh well I guess I just have to wait to find out anything so PLEASE update real soon please
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do you do that? I think your story is really great so far.. I wonder what happens next..after the exams I mean. Your usage of all their abilities are stupendous and how they all fit together, very well thought out. Highly impressive. I like the new weapons though they are kinda hard for me to picture. Drawings are nice any time you find to make'um. Also that thing you got going with Sasuke and Haku..nice. And Tenten and Hinata fighting it out for Naruto's love... I like that.. though I never thought you would pick Tenten of all people. I mean I understand why completely but it still seems out of character no matter what. I'm rooting for Tenten. Hinata should really go after Kiba. I think they're better for each other. Awesome Job on everything! I love how the story was planned out. Also if you don't already have an account with FanFiction.net I suggest one. You could easily produce up to 200 reviews with what you have now. I mean theirs this one person who has over 200 reviews for 2 pages! But that was for yaoi ( a.k.a. - gay fic ) I don't know how well this would do over there but I would definitely give it a try.. if you haven't already. Ja Ne! Update!
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 19:37 CDT
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I really liked the new tests although I'm a little confused by the first one. I kept picturing a scrabble board for some reason. The second test was pretty sweet. Can't wait for the last test. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Jaw drops* Naru is related to Sandaime Kazekage-kun? GREAT DAMN! I started reading this fic yesterday, but I had to stop for video games, food, bathroom, homework, and shopping with m' parents. That last one is torture in it's true form! I mean seriously! How is it possible for human arms to carry all that!? Any ways, I love Naru's bloodline, the Shisui eye transplant part, the Kaguya bloodline (Which I SO would have voted for earlier on), and especially Sandaime Kazekage-kun's Iron Sand. 1 question though...can you have Sasori interrupt the Chuunin exams and have Naru fight him? Naru doesn't HAVE to win, but it would be cool if he could avenge his father. Now normally, I believe The Yondaime Hokage is Naru's dad, but I LOVE the twist you pulled! Ja!-zigyy553
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERy broad & GOOD idea of naruto's multiple abilities, sasuke's pairing with Haku.
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERy broad & GOOD idea of naruto's multiple abilities, sasuke's pairing with Haku.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 19:57 CDT
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I thoght that chapter was really good I think it is cool that Naruto is a ninja of two nations and I really really really love it that your gong to make this a Naruto/Tenten and Hinata pairing THANK YOU for that hell because you never see that pairing you only see naruto and Hinata and I hate tosay it but to me I think it is getting kinda boring to only seeing Naruto and Hinata paired up all the time oh well thank you for updating and I hope you wll be hoping again soon so keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 14:04 CST
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Nice chap. I think Sasuke's fight was a little short. I really liked Anko's fight. Never would have thought that Iruka would be the one she fought. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT On: March 07, 2007 18:23 CST
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love your story but what ever happened to sakura?
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Title: I luv
Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 06:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah that is pretty cool how you keep um together. I love it so far. ^_^ UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 19:17 CST
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I'm really liking this story. Especially the fact that you keep the family of Naruto, Anko, and Sasuke together. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 18:35 CST
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I love ths story and I just hope that you are planning to UPDATE SOON because I want to read more of this storySO PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 02:00 CST
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Wow what can I say I have only read up chapter 19 and the only thing I can say is wow this story kicks major ass the thing is I hate Sasuke but in this story I like him I like how he acts having Naruto as a brother instead of thinking he is god with a stick up his ass but the went he is now with Naruto as his brother he is cool and I would of loved to see Naruto paired up with Haku but oh well it just seems like everybody wants to see Naruto only with Hinata when there are other to choose from don`t get me wrong I love that pairing as well but come on and give that pairing a break lt Naruto be with Tenten,Ino,Temari or even with Haku those are rare pairing oh yeah I think that last DNA Naruto aborsd should has been either Ino or the Lazy dude that would`ve been cool anyways I love this story and I hope that you will be UPDATING really soon please update soon
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