| "Naruto of the Mirage" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERy broad & GOOD idea of naruto's multiple abilities, sasuke's pairing with Haku.
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Reviewed By: RMCY13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 11:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERy broad & GOOD idea of naruto's multiple abilities, sasuke's pairing with Haku.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 19:57 CDT
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I thoght that chapter was really good I think it is cool that Naruto is a ninja of two nations and I really really really love it that your gong to make this a Naruto/Tenten and Hinata pairing THANK YOU for that hell because you never see that pairing you only see naruto and Hinata and I hate tosay it but to me I think it is getting kinda boring to only seeing Naruto and Hinata paired up all the time oh well thank you for updating and I hope you wll be hoping again soon so keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 14:04 CST
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Nice chap. I think Sasuke's fight was a little short. I really liked Anko's fight. Never would have thought that Iruka would be the one she fought. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT On: March 07, 2007 18:23 CST
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love your story but what ever happened to sakura?
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Title: I luv
Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 06:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah that is pretty cool how you keep um together. I love it so far. ^_^ UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 19:17 CST
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I'm really liking this story. Especially the fact that you keep the family of Naruto, Anko, and Sasuke together. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 18:35 CST
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I love ths story and I just hope that you are planning to UPDATE SOON because I want to read more of this storySO PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 02:00 CST
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Wow what can I say I have only read up chapter 19 and the only thing I can say is wow this story kicks major ass the thing is I hate Sasuke but in this story I like him I like how he acts having Naruto as a brother instead of thinking he is god with a stick up his ass but the went he is now with Naruto as his brother he is cool and I would of loved to see Naruto paired up with Haku but oh well it just seems like everybody wants to see Naruto only with Hinata when there are other to choose from don`t get me wrong I love that pairing as well but come on and give that pairing a break lt Naruto be with Tenten,Ino,Temari or even with Haku those are rare pairing oh yeah I think that last DNA Naruto aborsd should has been either Ino or the Lazy dude that would`ve been cool anyways I love this story and I hope that you will be UPDATING really soon please update soon
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Reviewed By: halo3128 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing story so far and can't wait for the next chapter please keep up with the story a little disappointing on the pairing, I completley understand that naruto/hinata isn't going to be a major part but i mean sasuke with his massive pride admited to himself he like haku somewhat where as naruto seems to not even notice hinata is around. Just a little thing that i saw.
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Reviewed By: sevant of Kyuubi On: January 15, 2007 01:36 CST
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Is this Kyuubi male, female, or neither?
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Reviewed By: sevant of Kyuubi On: January 14, 2007 23:16 CST
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Naruto wouldn't be able to turn them off and they would waste more chackra they usual, like the one Kakashi has.
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Reviewed By: Mark of Chaos On: January 04, 2007 16:15 CST
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im itching to read the next 1 this fic is wiked....that is all i can say Wiked story. how did the idea come 2 u???
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 11:00 CST
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AWESOME!!!! THE THIRD DOESN"T DIE, YEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!! Okay, I am being hyper, but I REALLY hated seeing the old man die in the fight with Orochimaru, using the Deathgod sealing technique to capture the souls of the First, Second and Orochimaru's arms, that was a necesary, but crappy way to go. Still, I love the story (it is awesome, in a sacrilligeous way, heh) and seeing Naruto do a beatdown on Gaara was well done too. Now if only more good Naru-tales would come out...
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Title: *_* (in shock)
Reviewed By: Silent Miko Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*_* wow! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! BUT!!! I AM REALLY PISSED OFF THAT THE SNAKE SHIT OCHIMARU PLACED THE CURSE SEAL ON THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! DID YOU REALLY HAVE TO DO THAT?? GGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!! THAT WASN'T NESSESSARY!!!!!!!!!!!!! >< but......... Other than that I love this story but i have one question WHO THE HELL IS GONNA LOVE SASUKE???
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