| "Naruto of the Mirage" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 21:40 CST
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That was really good. I'm slightly confused about whats going on... but I'm assuming you will be explaining some things. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 18:46 CDT
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Your new chapter was pretty good and well I hope you don`t take this the wrong way but I am starting to feel like I would rather read your story called True Hyuuga Genius but I don`t know it kinda seems like this story is getting kinda boring where Naruto seems to be very very strong with all those bloodlines I love that yo have Anko as Naruto`s mother and Sasuke even well I actually like him in this story but in truth I hate him and wish he would die like in your other story I loved it when Narut`s team well I mean Haren`s team knocked him out of the Chuunin exam or did I read that wrong its been awhile since an update I cann`t remember and I am really sorry about this review and I was wondering in the other Naruto or Bleach story what will they be about will how will Sasuke act in that story oh well I hope you will update your True Hyuuga Genius story soon I love that story
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: July 11, 2007 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens. So the Akatsuki leader actually shows up? I want to know whats going to happen once more PLEASE UPDATE.
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 21:05 CDT
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Well, thats a new way of writing how Gaara gets captured by Akatsuki. I'm really interested in seeing what happens next. Especially with Sakura. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 16:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, I would have reviewed sooner but i was on vacation!! I luvs as always!!! update soon! maybe sakura won't loose her arm after all...
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: May 25, 2007 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Update Update! I love this story I want to know whats going to happen update soon.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is great. Its suspens filled and unpredictable. The bloodline copyer is well explaned and orignal. I have a few question about Naruto's Sakashima Mangekyou Sharingan does he ever use it or is it reserved for Itachi, and dosn't he have the Tsukuyomi since he activated it when Itachi use it on him? Ans does the Sakashima Mangekyou Sharingan mess with the ussers normal eyesight? Please answer these questions in your next chapter.Wich I'm looking forward to.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 00:23 CDT
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Wow I thought chapter 24 was good it kinda sucked that Sakura lost an arm oh well please update soon I cann`t wait to read more of this story and the story True Hyuuga Genius now that story I wouldn`t mind reading more of heck its been so long sice I read it I cann`t remember where at in the story you stoped at so please update them soon PLEASE
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 16:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yess! I just luv this story! Can't wait for the next chap! sakura lost an arm? and she might take dd's? eewww and coool! Update as soon as possible! And don't forget your other fic true hyuuga genius! ~TS~ later...
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: April 16, 2007 10:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fan fiction Please update it soon. I really think you have a good imagination. I want to know whats going to happen hurry and please update.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 23:37 CDT
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Awesome story, and even more awesome, AN EARLY UPDATE!!! WOOT! Okay, now that I've calmed down...I really liked this chapter. Fun, interesting, and showing some new moves, it's pretty cool. Please update soon, ok? Later
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 23:06 CDT
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I love this story but I cann`t wait till you update this and True Hyuuga Genius I gotta know what is going to happen in that story oh well I guess I just have to wait to find out anything so PLEASE update real soon please
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 23:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do you do that? I think your story is really great so far.. I wonder what happens next..after the exams I mean. Your usage of all their abilities are stupendous and how they all fit together, very well thought out. Highly impressive. I like the new weapons though they are kinda hard for me to picture. Drawings are nice any time you find to make'um. Also that thing you got going with Sasuke and Haku..nice. And Tenten and Hinata fighting it out for Naruto's love... I like that.. though I never thought you would pick Tenten of all people. I mean I understand why completely but it still seems out of character no matter what. I'm rooting for Tenten. Hinata should really go after Kiba. I think they're better for each other. Awesome Job on everything! I love how the story was planned out. Also if you don't already have an account with FanFiction.net I suggest one. You could easily produce up to 200 reviews with what you have now. I mean theirs this one person who has over 200 reviews for 2 pages! But that was for yaoi ( a.k.a. - gay fic ) I don't know how well this would do over there but I would definitely give it a try.. if you haven't already. Ja Ne! Update!
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 19:37 CDT
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I really liked the new tests although I'm a little confused by the first one. I kept picturing a scrabble board for some reason. The second test was pretty sweet. Can't wait for the last test. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 01:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Jaw drops* Naru is related to Sandaime Kazekage-kun? GREAT DAMN! I started reading this fic yesterday, but I had to stop for video games, food, bathroom, homework, and shopping with m' parents. That last one is torture in it's true form! I mean seriously! How is it possible for human arms to carry all that!? Any ways, I love Naru's bloodline, the Shisui eye transplant part, the Kaguya bloodline (Which I SO would have voted for earlier on), and especially Sandaime Kazekage-kun's Iron Sand. 1 question though...can you have Sasori interrupt the Chuunin exams and have Naru fight him? Naru doesn't HAVE to win, but it would be cool if he could avenge his father. Now normally, I believe The Yondaime Hokage is Naru's dad, but I LOVE the twist you pulled! Ja!-zigyy553
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