| "Embracing the Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 249 ] |
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Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! *crowd cheers* woot. loved it. though, longer fight scene would of been better. anyway, keep up the good work. ~clusterkizard1
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: midnight-vampire66 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 20:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love this story ... please update soon i live for my fanfictions ... and that is sad but work is BORING so UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! u rule
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 20:27 EST
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Hehehe, this could be amusing. Update soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 17:18 EST
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Great Story!!
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Title: Ch. 13
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 14:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, FIGHT!!! I am soooo in luv w/ this story! I can't wait until u post more! So aweosme! *dances* -Nanu-chan
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Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 08:35 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my, that last bit sounded so wrong... in a good way. lets just suffice it to say that my mind went to the gutter... lol. anyway, i thought it was a brilliant chapter! cant wait for the next one... ~clusterlizard1
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 04:54 EST
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I liked the way you had her go visit Kiba in the hospital. She faced him about the blackmail and now they're cool with each other. And it seemed very logical that he would be a bit wary of her now that he knows she bears a curse mark like Sasuke did. I would think they would ALL be wary of her. Did they send anyone to retrieve Sasuke? (Darn it, I can't remember.) Or are they giving him up as a lost cause this time? I always enjoy descriptions of the sand village lands. I think it's all unfolding very nicely, but I'm looking forward to some more dialogue (and other things) between Kagome and Naruto. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 21:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Group Of Story Fans* MORE MORE MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kagome and L [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 22:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can Gaara-san please be put in the pairing? :puppydog eyes:
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 20:28 EST
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Neh, it was a basic, but interesting character. Of course, what is funny is, is what if Naruto is Inuyasha reborn? Just a thought. Anyway, the chapter wasn't great, but not bad either, overall. Just keep updating, this is starting to get interesting. Ja ne.
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Title: If you want a beta
Reviewed By: Lord_Inuyasha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 19:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I don't know if you want a beta or not but I'm very good at editing and no offense it looks like you might need one. If you want to take me up on my offer email me at ShadowGuardian08@yahoo.com. Don't use the Lord_Inuyasha17 one because I hardly ever check it. Hope to hear from you soon.
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Title: Ch. 13
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESH!!!! *dances* that's so awesome! I luved it! Yay Gaa-chan! *glomp* Eh, its ok, no harm done w/ teh whole flashback thing! :D I can't wait until the next chapter! (so glad u didn't stick it as a cliffhanger, i would have cried XD lol) I hope 2 read more soon! *dances* -Nanu-chan
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter!!
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Reviewed By: El Ahrairah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... Kagome needs to grow another tail or two. I know a one-tailed is still powerful, but she's weak compaired to Kyuubi, and wouldn't the jewel want a powerful protector? Ehh, oh well. Mua ha ha! FEAR MY STERNNESS... Great story still ^^
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 22:35 EST
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hehe...guess what I have know Idea how this happen (I blame my e-mail for putting SOME of the story updates in my bolk insted of my inbox) but I never read that part "In your minds eye" well I have now and I'm sooooooooooo glad I did because some much make sence now....not that it was too confussing before but It did feel like something was skip....lol...all is well In Nyuka world now........also I guess I sound like a really depressing person when I write, a little of my Yang for my Yin personality If I do say so my self...well maybe its like my extiror in yin and my in side in yang and you can tell though my writing hmmm, well the reason I say this is cause first NAME THAT VIEWER I was the Movie Sleepy Hollow which is ment to be a scary depressing movie and the second one I was the Evil Glar acctrully I think its really funny ya made me laugh XD thank you for that....hehe......well any ways I can't believe the first impression Kagome left on the sand ninja's, I'm glad Naruto came to the rescue that would have gotten really ugly really fast, heck it still might all depends on how gerous you feeling.....hehe....Well I hope she don't get in too much truble......Waiting for the next update...Always............Nyuya.....'Meow'
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