| "Embracing the Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 249 ] |
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 12:33 EDT
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Hmmm, things are never that simple. Neh. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Miheran [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 07:42 EDT
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all i can ask is do you want to be killed. 'cause i sware that someone will hunt you down if you don't finalise if Kagome is dead or not. anyway great chapter and can't wait for the next. keep writing
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2008 07:33 EDT
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great story plz plz update it soon
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2008 13:45 EDT
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AHHH!!!!!!! The suspense is killing me!! Please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2008 20:21 EDT
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Gosh I love it...why would I hurt you????.....I know Kagome can't be dead...for goodness sake she is Kagome she can't die.....(at least I hope not) but that display was just too beautifuly tragic.....Ok I must sound really criptic right now or at least really crazy but I can't love it I just love tragic ends like that.........hmmmmm I wander how long its been since I've 'seen' as scene like this ....... Ya know I hat the whole thing about Kagome because she can't die I mean this whole story is about her.... and that trully is a tragic end....but I love that self sacrafic thing.....as long as they don't stay dead ya know....kind of like the lion from Narnia the lion witch and the wardrob...I love that movie/book.....any who....I wander where Narto and Garaa went........................this is a mean cliffy regardless of my criptic thoughts about it....so update soon will ya...............Nyuka
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Title: AHHHHHH!!!
Reviewed By: Samantha_Shelby [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2008 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No! NO! NOOOOO!!!! That is not fair! That was the biggest cliffhanger yet! I don't think that you'll kill Kagome off, but what an evil cliffhanger! EVIL I TELL YOU!!! I really want the next chapter now! More than ever! I hope you do more with the little shadow girl. She seemed like an interseting character. It's funny, but now that I think about it, almost all of Kagome's friends did something bad to her on the first meeting. Inuyasha tried to kill her. Shippo stole from her. Miroku kidnapped her, then stole from her. Sango attacked Inuyasha. Naruto and Kakashi chased her and tied her up. They all ended up friends though, so I hope it's the same for the little girl(I can't remember how to spell her name!). Anyway, this was an awesome chapter... long too... but I want more darn it. Pwitty Pweeze!!! :P. Anyway, with my weirdness out of the way- Thanks for updating. I really enjoy this story. I just reread all of the chapters again, that's why I didn't review earlier.
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Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 02:11 EDT
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ooohh.. lovely chapter. im gald you didnt let Kagome + Co. defeat Orochiumaru this chapter, it would sucked. anywho, i'll see you next chapter. in the meantime, i recommend listening to the xxxHolic opeing theme 19Sai by Suga Shikao. its awesome! ~clusterlizard1
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Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2008 02:11 EDT
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ooohh.. lovely chapter. im gald you didnt let Kagome + Co. defeat Orochiumaru this chapter, it would sucked. anywho, i'll see you next chapter. in the meantime, i recommend listening to the xxxHolic opeing theme 19Sai by Suga Shikao. its awesome! ~clusterlizard1
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 15:42 EDT
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...............very evil of you....you had better update soon....*evil glare with two doberman incers with spiked collars snapping at you*
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 00:19 EDT
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Well I really like it but the name spellings are very inconsistent throughout the fic, I think you have about 3 different spellings of Sasuke in various places & in the most recent chapter it's Sauske. Looking forward to the next chapter to see what happened to everyone.
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Title: Correction...
Reviewed By: VahnDeathHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I can tell that you enjoy writing and would prolly like all the mistakes you have done corrected, so I noticed that you forgot the e in believe in the part where naruto is doing all the blocking and the swiping
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Title: Awesomely Amazing
Reviewed By: Samantha_Shelby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 17:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! I am a closet pervert (in person) so this chapter made my day! I love being involved in your author's notes! It;s *Sooooooo* much fun!!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 02:05 EDT
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*Blush*...the way you stopped it last chapter I really didn't think you where going to go through with it....IS DURING A MISSION REALLY THE TIME OR PLACE TO DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT!!!....man I wander what Kagome would have done if Naruto didn't show up when he did...sigh....but gosh I can't believe you would think of me like that ...any of us....its so embarassing...lol..but hey it was funny and at least I didn't get it as bad as GrayPheonix...lol...well to say the least it was entertaining and well done...weird sound Ninja though.....wait a minute I just got a scary though what if this 'joining' *blush* of Kagome and Naruto does something to Naruto too...what if it hurt Kyuubi...I mean what could be the side affects of her curse mark on him.....also be for I forget are they mates now??? they did bite eachothers necks after all...hmmmm...I wander....well theres nothing I can do about it this is your fic after all....sooo update soon.....................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 04:51 EDT
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Fabulous chapter! I can't wait to read more, update soon!
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