| "Embracing the Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 249 ] |
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2009 09:43 EDT
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Great New Chapter as always
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Reviewed By: black fox dawn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 23:58 EDT
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oh yeah keep going with this story this is getting really good
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Title: So much better then months...
Reviewed By: Samantha_Shelby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2009 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! It is better! Thank you for the update... Dang! I thought she was gonna make it out too! Oh, well. Yay for Twins! And Naruto as a mediator. I laughed at that! What irony. I hope Kagome manages to knock some sense into Sasuke. He's a jerk, but I suppose he has good reasons. Well, not GOOD reasons, but probable cause at least. Thanks for the update and I can't wait for the next chapter. What happened to our review reward cookies? *Pouts*
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2009 10:33 EDT
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Now the question are you gonna update of the moon and wind? and love the chappie
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Title: OMFG! CLIFFHANGER!
Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 05:46 EDT
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Woo... don't we love updates? They're just so cool... Epic update by the way... Nice cliffy. We all know what lengths females go to protect their young... I wonder how 'bad-ass' Kagome's go on them...? ~clusterlizard1
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Reviewed By: Samantha_Shelby [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2009 17:46 EDT
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I'm so glad you posted the next chapter. I also, just fished finals (first year of college is offically done!) and I haven't had time to read much, or I would have reviewed sooner. I hope they get on with the rescue mission soon! I really HATE Orochimaru and Kabuto. Keep up the good work and have a good summer.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2009 12:42 EDT
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Kagome not dead huh? this should be interesting. Wait till Naruto finds out.
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Title: Breathtaking
Reviewed By: RainLily13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 02:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Usually I don't review stories very much unless they really call out to me, and I have got to say that this story had enraptured my attention and kept it hostage. Never before have I read such a dedicated, amazing, beautifully written story such as yours... it's enough to make me cry... This is the first full length Nar/Inu crossover with Kagome and Naruto as the pairing that I've come across, and I am not disappointed. For so long I have been searching for something like this, something to keep me interested, make me laugh, cry, anxious, and so many other feelings... and I'm so happy to have finally found one. Truth be told I have not read a story of such high stature and perfect quality for quite some time, and out of years of reading multiple stories yours definitely ranks up to the top three, hell I think it's number one, and that's saying something... Yours is a story that I can only hope and wish my own Naruto/Kagome paired story would come out anywhere close to this amazing. I absolutely adore Kagome's and Naruto's relationship, the way they are just tuned together and fit like a puzzle piece. And Kagome's ability to wiggle her way into even the coldest hearts is admirable. And I applaud you on the last couple chapters... I'm pretty sure a tear fell right there. Poor Naruto, and Inuyasha too. Ack, it must be hell to finally mate with the one you love and have them ripped away from you after just one day. And I cannot wait to read what happens next with Kagome and her little bun in the oven. I'm just itching to know, how will she escape?! Is Naruto, Inuyasha and the gang going to rescue her?! Oh, does Orochimaru know about her little secret...? 'Pouts' I guess I'll have to wait as patiently as I can manage for those answers. Your style of writing is envious and to die for. It's balanced, a nice dose of dialogue, action, and thought input mixed into one. Spelling and Grammar is perfect as far as I noticed, but I think I was too engaged in reading this to really notice any mistakes... heheh XD This is definitely original and you are VERY creative. This story is one none like others, you should be proud! Hahahh and I DEFINTELY enjoyed this, to say otherwise would be a complete and utter lie. Why else would I stay up until 2.30 in the morning to finish reading this?! So no my dear, this was a far cry from boring, but it was practically on top of exciting and mind trapping. Overall? Damn best story ever read... but I think I already said that lol But I do have a question... it refers to the mate marks... Now I know this isn't very reliable, but whenever I read about a story that dealt with mate marks they are usually a means of communication, and usually fade away from the remaining mate after one has died. So when there was a mate mark I would have thought that Kyuubi would have picked up on the fact it's still there and that he should feel that they are still connected. Unless, however, you decided to snuff that and made it so that the mark is just a mark that will stay throughout life and then on. If so then that's fine, I just wanted to put that out there... But besides that small thing, I loved reading this, and it was the highlight of my day/night lol I cannot wait until I read the next chapter, I'm soo excited and kept in suspense at what might happen next!! XD Fantastic work, truly!! Please update as soon as you are able to!! And thank you so much for writing this! Not many would stick through writing a story for long as you have!! I mean seriously, almost two years? 'Whistles' That takes some serious dedication right there!! Take care! Till laters, RainLily
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Reviewed By: Vampire_Bride [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2009 12:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MMMMOOOORRRREEEE PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE??? WITH CHERRIES ON TOP???? AND WHIP CREAM AND ANYTHING ELSE THERE IS???????????????
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Title: Thanks!
Reviewed By: Samantha_Shelby [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!! I am so glad that you updated. Those snarky jewel voices are so frickin' mean. But hey! Baby! Yay for Baby!!! Baka Orochimaru. Baka Kabuto. Any way, as you probably know, I have been checking for updates on this story constently the last few months. When I went to check today, I actually almost left the site because I didn't realize the new chapter was up. I had to do a double take. Again, thank you for taking the time to write. This story is alot of fun and I really enjoy reading it. S.S.
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Reviewed By: ayashi77 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2009 21:14 EST
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Wow Kagome is going to have Naruto baby! Is Kagome going to meet Naruto and is she going to mate Naruto again?
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Reviewed By: Shadow Foxx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 17:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG you finily updated! And what a great chapter it was! (happy! happy! joy! joy!)
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Reviewed By: Lunabell [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 02:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lol! You know I almost thought you paired kagome with naraku! Enyway I love the story so far. I just started reading it. ^_^
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Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 01:20 EST
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ooh, I see it now. The 'voices' that communicate with her are the demons that are sealed within... well her now since she's the jewel. And that last little sigh was from Midoriko, yes? Most awesome.see you next chapter ~clusterlizard1
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Reviewed By: Shadow Foxx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 16:31 EST
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Over 4 count them 4 months thats like 124ish days. Why won't you update?... Please?
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