| "Feudal Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Title: good story
Reviewed By: admaj On: December 12, 2006 21:46 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I like this story. It is very orginal and your writing is very good. This is one of the best stories I have read in awhile and it also kept my interest. thanks for writing it and coming up with the idea. J
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 21:34 EST
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w00T!!! I love it. Don't worry about anyone being OOC, it is a fanfiction, no? Your ideas in another person's characters. I love this, though. Original idea and all. Can't wait to read more, update and I'll give you a giant cookie *picks up a twelve-foot tall chocolate chip cookie* This bad boy can be all yours! ^.~ ~Shadow
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Reviewed By: keep writing!! On: December 12, 2006 17:59 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! i've read your other works, and this definitely lives up to them! i can't write much cuz i'm at work right now, but i'll definitely write a better review later.....if there's more chapters to review on, that is. XD keep 'em comin'!!!
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Reviewed By: star555555528(nsi) On: December 12, 2006 16:25 EST
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This is really good and gave me a good break from studying evil math. I can't wait till you update. Ok well I better get back to the books bye!
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Reviewed By: Rose of Sharon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 15:52 EST
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Its not good. Its BRILLIANT. I love your stories, and this one seems just to be turning out just as well!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: December 12, 2006 13:46 EST
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yup, i'm a sucker for period romance, especially when it blooms out of having no idea what to expect from one another. *carnal desires* snort! i can't picture a human yashy with those! is kikyou jealous? or is she hoping that kagome's arrainged marraige simply turns out as poorly as hers? i can't wait to see if inuyasha does prove to kagome how wrong kikyou is about how men can be! and their father should be strung up by his toes. this was a great start and i'll be watching for more.
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 10:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this so far. I feel as though I am watching a Japanese period film. You did a good job setting up background and keeping true to the formality of the era. I look forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 08:32 EST
Comment/Review:
I like it! Update soon!!!!!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 03:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good start, I love the premise. I too, am a sucker for romances so this should be good. I love the setting you placed them in. And its still Inu and Kagome, so OOC is kewl. Love AU fics. Keep up the good work and update when ya can! :P
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Title: Feudal Tale
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 02:47 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far. The story looks to be very promising. I am a sucker for romance and it looks like you have the skills to pull it off. Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: probert On: December 12, 2006 00:29 EST
Comment/Review:
Its good so far...keep updating i like it.
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