| "Feudal Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ivellios [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 01:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, original AU story. The happy ending is a nice touch. I look foward to your future works and i hope you update soon. Sincerely, Zach
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Reviewed By: Fukai Mori On: March 31, 2007 23:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was great. The epilouge was perfect, but I'm so sad it's over because it was oe of my favourite stories. by the way, just to mention at in the last sentence of your story you say 'but she would trade them for the world.' I believe you meant 'she wouldn't trade them for the world.' I have to say that line made me chuckle. But yet again I love the story, it was beautifully written and I'm hopping you'll write another story. Good Job! Ta Ta
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Reviewed By: kittypaws182 On: March 26, 2007 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww that was such a cute epilogue & the whole story was really good and I really enjoyed it ^_^ Ja ne Kittypaws182
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Title: Skittlez
Reviewed By: lemonskittles [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This story was amazing!!! One of the very few good fanfics I have read in almost a year! A piece of advice though, You should have mentioned the sister's names sooner in your story. Also, you should have gave a little more detail on her life with her family. Maybe put a little in there about how the family had little money and something about playing with her sisters. Maybe put some type of flashback to emphisize that. Another thing you could have done is maybe have them be just a slight bit intimate. I loved your story and after I finish this review I am gonna see if you have others. ^.^ -Skittlez
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 20:26 EDT
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aw thast was one of the best stories i have ever read. amazing. keep up the unbeliveable work!
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Reviewed By: InuAngelInuDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 15:37 EDT
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Could you just update it already! New Chapter please! I have been waiting for months! THANK YOU! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Ebony_fox [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update! This story is really addicting! And is he going to give her the box he made? And what about their baby? Is it a boy or a girl? And what about Kikyo? Great story I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 17:51 EST
Comment/Review:
Are you going to continue the story?
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Reviewed By: Cloe(not signed in) On: February 16, 2007 22:39 EST
Comment/Review:
I'd love to help with the spanish translation of this story. I'm from Venezuela --south america-- and my e-mail is ojosclaros990@hotmail.com Escribeme si aún no has conseguido ayuda! Bye!
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Reviewed By: Fukai Mori On: February 13, 2007 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww. It's so sweet and perfect. I really love this story and I was so worried for a while that you stopped writing. But I really don't want it to end, it's one of the few good fic's I'm reading -_-;; I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Em On: February 09, 2007 21:47 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story when is the epilogue coming????
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Title: amzingly well done
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 22:04 EST
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I think this fanfic is just absolutely great and I am hoping to read more in the future ^ ^ keep it up
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Title: lovin it
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 21:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am addicted to this tale. did you know that there are so many present day inu stories but hardly any feudal ones? and what makes it so sad is the story takes place in the fuedal area? I love this, though this doesn't sound like feudal japan, you captured the characters and almost made them your own. this tale is enjoyable to read
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Reviewed By: dreamer778 On: February 02, 2007 15:11 EST
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yay epologe! please please please update soon i cant wait to read the final chapter! i loved the story. keep upi the good work.
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Title: Yays!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 21:43 EST
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Chapter 8 was absolutely great! I can't wait to read more and I know what you mean about school. I am in my second symester right now and a lot of my friends graduated early so I am like alone in school *sighs* I hope that the spanish thing goes well. I'd help but heh, me no speak spanish XD I can't wait to read the epilogue and thanks a bunch for updating ^ ^
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