| "Feudal Tale" Reviews/Comments [ 86 ] |
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Reviewed By: kristenb On: December 15, 2006 17:43 EST
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My, it's certainly rare to find a decent inu/kag fic these days, much less a historical, realistic and semi-in-character one. Kagome and Inuyasha are different, but only in how the Tokugawa period would have affected their behavior. I'm so glad you didn't turn Inuyasha into a experienced playboy or a social butterfly, and Kagome was outspoken but balanced. I really enjoyed reading it; I've read some other stories by you before and liked them, but something in this one compelled me to review (which I am ashamed to admit I don't do very often). The only thing I can say to make your fic better is to watch the modern day idioms--the one I especially noticed in chapter 3 was that Inuyasha said all his product was up to "spec" which I don't think a craftsman from the Tokugawa period would say, but that just could be me. I think there might have been more but they slipped my mind. Anyway, keep up the uncliched work!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: December 15, 2006 17:37 EST
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good story so far
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 16:34 EST
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Sweet. I out of school today for winter break. Don't know about my grades yet. I like the new chapter. You've seemed to have given InuYasha more of a personality than you have in other chapters, I like it. You also seem to be implying something with all the carvings, no? And is the engraved box going to be for Kagome? I bet it is...either that or InuYasha has some explaining to do. LoL. Who is Sesshoumaru's wife and what is wrong with her? Love how the story is going along. Are you going to be getting into the main plot soon? I know you said you wanted long replies but this is full of questions, eh? Usually I can guess what'll be happening in a story, but yours seems to have me stumped. Congragulations. Can't wait 'till monday. Until then, ~Shadow
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Title: awsome!!!!!
Reviewed By: butterpecanrican On: December 15, 2006 12:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story hope to get more real soon.
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Reviewed By: BlackMamba07 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 19:55 EST
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Really nice fic here. Different. I like the AU setting, and you have a beautiful writing style. Can't wait for more!
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Title: good chapter
Reviewed By: thecatzpajamas [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 09:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter! kagome's still a little shy, but it looks like she's opening up a bit (*hinthint* is she gonna be like her old self at all? please? a little bit???) anyway, i know what you're talking about with the finals T-T. i just finished my finals yesterday, and i'm so relieved to be on christmas break! GOOD LUCK ON YOUR TESTS AND ON THIS STORY!
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Reviewed By: chispa On: December 14, 2006 01:20 EST
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Nuts,you skipped over the lemon! I still like this though.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2006 00:31 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most excellent. Update when ya can! :D
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Reviewed By: coykoi On: December 13, 2006 23:48 EST
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Ah finals suck don't they? I just started reading this, and I just love the new perspective on the anime. This is great.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Demons_Heart [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 22:32 EST
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Squee. You get your giant 12 foot tall chocolate chip cookie now, kay? What is InuYasha's job? Is he like a carpenter or something? Good story. I find nothing at all wronge with it. Good plot line. No spelling or grammar errors. Original. I love it. Hm...this time you'll get brownies. I think MM allows answers to reviews, others do it I know and don't in in trouble. ~Shadow
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 20:49 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Congrats to you for doing well on your math final! Just know that you deserve all the wonderful reviews that you are receiving. You have captured my full attention with your detailed writing and I am looking forward to reading more from you. Good luck with your exam on Friday and take care.
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Reviewed By: Eartha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2006 19:55 EST
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Dang, you have me pegged. Ugh, I realllllly don't want to study. Please update soon. I like period pieces, and it seems you have done your homework on Japanese history. Alright...back to studying.
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Reviewed By: secret35 On: December 13, 2006 18:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this story is so cute, it's absoulutly amazing i can't wait until the next chapter so keep it up. love secret35
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Reviewed By: mela98989 On: December 13, 2006 11:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great start I cant wait to see what happens please continue soon
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Reviewed By: beth1685 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 22:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start. I enjoyed both the character development of all the characters (though especially Kagome and Inu Yasha) as well as the interesting and engaging storyline and all the possibilities/issues that you've introduced. I'm eager to see how Kagome and Inu Yasha's relationship will develop and progress throughout the plot. Your writing style is very clean and polished, and flows very naturally. You captured each voice perfectly and made the characters your own in this unique setting. I liked the attention to detail and never felt that the characters were OOC because you clearly conveyed the setting and circumstances of each of their lives in this particular time period. This story is a refreshing change--I've been looking for a good story to read for awhile now and this is perfect. Hope to see more soon!
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