| "The Joys of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: kizuna4me [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2007 11:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
more please. so cute!!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2007 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg..pleasee update soon......................... this is sooooo cute...please update soon.......pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ...with hiei on top....
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2007 09:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:4 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: VB On: January 18, 2007 12:13 CST
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That's what I wanted to know!! I was so looking forward to them finding out. I hate you. Now excuse me while I go throw a tantrum
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: January 17, 2007 19:17 CST
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What happened to Kagome? Wouldn't father/son sense Kagome being in danger? How will SD and Koenma react to finding out about Sota and Kagome? Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 18:47 CST
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Nice job! Loved the explanation of juvenile fire demon behavior. Very original. But, where the heck is Kagome? These juveniles are into torture and murder -- what about rape? Wonder why they gathered where they are? The other SDs still haven't put 2 and 2 together, have they? Can't wait for it to hit them that Souta is Hiei's son! Looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: xFluffiesGirlx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 14:59 CST
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Love your story^-^ i think yukina should stay as heie's sister it would be too weird if she was there daughter
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Reviewed By: darkenedsoul91 On: January 14, 2007 15:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
stay as a sister, a daughter would just be so weird. i love how Sota is actually Kagomes son, its really different. i love your story, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Millicent_Hellix_ On: January 14, 2007 13:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Stay as a Sister. I fine it too weird for it to be a daughter, really. But anyway, I like it so far, can you makea chapter with a flashback of when Kagome and Hiei were kids? that would be sooooo cute. any, also, im sorry for the requests, but if there are going to be lemons, can you put warning? I love your story, Very cute. keep it up.
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Reviewed By: VB On: January 13, 2007 19:21 CST
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I'd like for her to be their daughter but how would that work? Unless she's older than Souta and her father left her with Hiei when he took pregnant Kagome away. If it stays sister then Hiei's going to have to tell her before Souta accidentally does. And Souta would have an aunt to take care of him when his parents are busy because you know once Koenma finds out he's going to trick Kagome into being a spirit detective. Oh yes and I hate you. Why because I want another chapter right this second. I wanted them to meet already. Come on please update soon pleeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon...(Takes Hiei from you and kisses him on the forhead.) (stops Kissing him on his head)...*You Walk forward and open your arms*...(hiei is mine back off) (looks around then gets a sad expression.)(I only share with you if you update soon)(smiles)(hands him over to you..) please... Also I liked the way the rest of the team is drawn into Hiei's personal life... he'd probably never tell them he had a mate and a son.... The question is... who is coming after kagome and souta? is it her father.... Will they arrive in time to help...Or will Kagome be battling by herself? and when are kagome and Hiei even going to "reunite"... i feel bad for the two having been seperated all those years!poor kagome...poor hiei..hell poor Souta he didnt even no he had a father untill after kagome told him...poor poor souta didnt even have a clue..... Also Can't wait for everyone's reaction to finding out about hiei's family!omg....what will koenma do..? pleasee sont let him take them away....also this is a very original story...i dont find alot of these...well pleaseeeeeeeeee update soon...please...PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE....with hiei on top..lol
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Reviewed By: Sphinx_Jenni On: January 13, 2007 00:43 CST
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Daughter defintally their daughter. by the way is there going to be a lemon in there somewhere. Stories with Kagome/Hiei just aren't the same without Lemons...Lots and lots of lemons.
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Reviewed By: reyesdragon On: January 12, 2007 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Can you please leave Yukina as Hiei's sister? I am sorry but after seeing the episodes for so long it seems weird to me. I like it and I enjoy it very much. I do not know if I rated the right way but I loved the originality.
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Reviewed By: gcdv [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
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awww thats so cooool!!! i think that u should keep Yukina as his sister.
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Reviewed By: Gina_031552 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2007 13:17 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Wow!!! This story is soooo awesome. It is very special. I never read this kind of story before. Also, you should remain Yukina as Hiei's sister. I cannot think of her in any shape or form as Hiei's daughter. That just so wrong and wierd.
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