| "The Joys of Life" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 01:34 CDT
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Yay! Another chapter! You're really doing a lot of writing. Again: yay! I liked that one, too. I like the way Yusuke brazenly lied to her. And I really like Miroku as a lecherous fire demon. I can't believe Hiei just turned his back on his contract like that. Won't the Reikai send people after him? (Like his friends?) He could be locked up or executed for breaking that contract, couldn't he? I like it that Kurama told the other two who Kagome and Souta are. And now that they've reunited with Sango and Miroku, maybe Hiei and Kagome can actually spend a little time together. Of course, trouble and danger are lurking right outside... Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 19, 2007 00:06 CDT
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What will happen once they report to Koenma? Does Konema awre of Hiei's family, other then Yukina? Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 21:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon./..
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Reviewed By: Anonymous0 On: March 16, 2007 22:43 CDT
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Very interesting. Would Kagome stop the fighting? Why are Sango and Hiei fighting? How will the SD react when they find out about Kagome and Hiei? What happened to Kagome in the woods? Please update ASAP
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 15:01 CDT
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Veeery interesting chapter! You're playing this one close to the chest -- raising more questions, and keeping a tight lid on the answers. I like the idea of Sango and Miroku being part of things in this way. I can't wait to find out exactly why Sango is so mad at Hiei -- I caught a little of it, but not really the whole picture, I think. Does Sango realize Kagome is there? Or has she been too wrapped up in her anger to sense her? Is Kagome going to introduce herself to the detectives? I would think she would at least demand to know who they are, considering they are in her home. You have really been doing a lot of writing the past few days. (Yay!) I'm following your stories and watching anxiously for more of them!
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Reviewed By: blackXangelX101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love love love ur fic so much i cant wait until u update again
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Reviewed By: Chickenfingers On: March 10, 2007 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awsome, please keep writing. ASAP keep writing please!!!
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Reviewed By: VB On: March 08, 2007 00:40 CST
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THAT WASN'T A REAL CHAPTER!! I hate you! That long long wait and then the excitement of a new chapter only for my hopes and dreams to be dashed by your sadistic evil! Oh cruel fate! *faints*..........Feel miserable yet?...Well enough of that update soon I really want to know what happened.
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon...Oh i cant wait..its just so good..please...
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 03:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please update soon
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Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 22:06 CST
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Wonder how long before Kuwbara and Yusuke realize he's Hiei's son. Did the guys other then Kurama saw Kagome? How badly was she? When she wakes up, what will happen and does Koenma know about her? Please update ASAP.
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Reviewed By: dejaz On: March 06, 2007 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
write more write more please!! i love this story!! hiei and kagome pairings are my favorites!!! up date soon
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 15:46 CST
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You're such a tease! What happened to Kagome? Kurama realizes she is Hiei's mate and that Souta is his son, but do Yusuke and Kuwabara know? And it's only been 1 day? Whoa! WHAT a day! Good golly, will Hiei ever get some time to "reunite" with his mate with so much going on? I can't wait for you to add more to this!
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Reviewed By: dejaz On: February 18, 2007 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!! i absolutly love this story PLEASE up date very soon!!
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Reviewed By: sugar&spice On: February 13, 2007 20:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story . It is so awsome Please update i wanna see what happens if they find outt he souta is hiei's son. You are a very good author.
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