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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 17:21 CDT
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plz continue
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 04:49 CDT
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Well, the first two chapters sound good. I think you infused a little more warmth into Hiei's interaction with Souta, didn't you? I'll be looking forward to the rest of the story coming along.
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Reviewed By: FEMALE_INUYASHA __not logged in___ On: May 19, 2007 00:09 CDT
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What the Hell|?!?!?!?!?!?! what happened where'd all the chapters go?!?!?!? there was like....twenty...ok not twenty but at least eight or nine...what happened? are you revising?
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Reviewed By: sadx On: April 18, 2007 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i llig
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 17:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon....
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Reviewed By: pieisgood [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this keep writing dude!! This story is totally AWSWOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue
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Reviewed By: bluemoon_175 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Things keep on heating up and I can't wait to read and see what happens, so I hope you update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 03:04 CDT
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VERY interesting new world situation you have created! Nice! Loved the introduction of Kikyou as Kagome's older sister. And she killed Inuyasha's mate and children? Love the way you're bringing INU into the story, too. Was he dallying with her? Well, at least Souta is getting some fluff. Um, Hiei spent two days with Kikyo thinking she was his mate? Ew, I really don't like that. How the heck could that be? Even if they looked exactly alike, he should have been able to recognize his mate. Heck, if they slept together once, he'd know -- no two women are alike in bed. And now Inuyasha is going to try to kill Kagome thinking she's Kikyou? Maybe he'll fall in love with her instead. Heck, someone has to spend some time with her. Her mate, who was unfaithful and hasn't fessed up to it, who was kept from her for so long, can't sit around and help name their children? Throw him back. LOL!! (Sorry, I'm just not getting any feeling for them caring for each other yet.) Seems he'd be more likely to be smotheringly close after losing her once already. He showed more feeling for his son's growing romance than for his own. Can't believe he helped him out like that, since it means taking in a human girl. I liked the little line dropped that told about Kurama meeting with them periodically. Love the whole 'safe houses' premise. So, Kikyou and Takeshi are trying to get Kagome killed? What would they gain by that? Lots of stuff going on in this chapter. Can't wait to find out some of the answers!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon....loved the chapter cant wait...
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohh very nice pdate soon please
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Reviewed By: perfectlittlegirl(offline) On: March 23, 2007 01:07 CDT
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ur story is great! please continue it! update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 20:58 CDT
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Very interesting. So, Naraku has provided demons with access to the Ningenkai, -- wonder what his game is? And Takeshi is Kagome's father, right? Apparently, Hiei and his clan have an idea of what is going on, though. Wonder what they plan to do? I like it that Hiei sent Miroku to make sure Kurama's mother was safe. That was a great gesture to an old friend. The plot thickens!
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 19:38 CDT
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i liked this chapter Update soon
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 15:23 CDT
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i love it update soon please
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