| "Photocopy" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Title: Part 8
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting. So Ranma is looking for her sister. Hmm... an OC or someone that appeared in one of the crossovers you use?
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 13:04 CST
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yay, update! Anyway, thanks for updating, this is getting, complicated. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Caleb On: November 12, 2007 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very original crossover, and with impressive potential and complexity. A very original ranma character, keep writing this one!
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Reviewed By: cnwjr On: November 12, 2007 09:45 CST
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Very interesting concept. This story has potential, but the massive crossover element is already starting to be annoying. I will monitor this to see if it lives up to its potential, but I already have my doubts.
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Reviewed By: Vilkath [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 19:01 CST
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This fic is hard to describe, the basic idea is brilliant perhaps the most orginal Ranma spring ever. Yet ranma, let alone male ranma has yet to really make an appearance in this fic. Over all I think you are crossing to many worlds over to fast, with to many characters taking the main spot light. I think things might of turned out a little better if you focused onto Ranma and what was happening around him/her. You have so many vilians, heros, and unkowns floating about it's total chaos with no real goal insight. Chaos can be fun... but uncontrolled chaos rarely turns out well in xover fics.
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Title: Chapter 6
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 02:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see you haven't forgotten Ranma. Great like always.
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The plot thickens. Another fine chapter, except there's no Ranma. Oh well, maybe next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Ice-Tea-1983 On: October 21, 2007 18:02 CDT
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I apologise, while I find this story entertaining, it is becoming much to "Crackish" for my tastes.
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Reviewed By: James963 On: October 19, 2007 18:58 CDT
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A somewhat interesting story goes down in flames due to excessive crossovers; which is a pity since it was fairly original. A couple of other points in general: You can't seem to make up your mind whether to use male or female pronouns when Ranma is in female form; personally I prefer it if the appropriate gender pronoun is used for Ranma's current body; it makes it easier to remember which body he/she is in. You use pony-tailed entirely to often to describe Ranma.
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Reviewed By: notBald [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 12:52 CDT
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Hmm, looks like there are more forces at work than just Ranma. I suspect Cologne will come to regret her decision.
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Title: Chapter 4
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2007 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this chapter. I appreciate what you've done to Kuno.
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Reviewed By: notBald [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 01:57 CDT
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Seems like someone is building an army. But is it Ranma? I suppose it is, but can't be too sure.
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent idea to add Star Trek to the mix. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: AK_Kuma On: September 14, 2007 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic! Can't wait for the next chapter. Style is easy to follow, I didn't notice any misspelling or such, but i'm not the best at that anyways so take that with a grain of salt. Really nice story so far with a quick pace. Over all one of the better story ideas i've read in a long time. the others out there seem to be a rinse and repeat type, so its nice to get something completely new :)
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Title: Very good
Reviewed By: notBald [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 13:03 CDT
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Having Ranma fall into the spring of drowned replicator is ingenious. But how can a robot drown? :P. Looking forwards to Ranma flexing her muscles in the universe. Even more to when Ranma meets up with the other replicators, or for that sake the Asgaar.
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