| "Short Bus" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: star555555528(not signed on) On: February 02, 2007 15:29 CST
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Hey, you have some errors again sooo email the chapters & I'll fix then again. It's going really well so far!
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Reviewed By: the unnamed critic. On: January 03, 2007 18:14 CST
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in chapter 4, the first paragraph says she`s sixteen, but when she introduces herself, she says she`s fifteen?
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 21:20 CST
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Awesome story!!! I totally love it. you did have spelling errors. if youd like I will read over them.
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Reviewed By: megtheteler [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 01:56 CST
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pretty good for 2 chappies. u just described 2 of my friends there, so its kinda easy to visualize.
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Reviewed By: triviatrap1982 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 13:37 CST
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Hey this is a good story, but I noticed a couple of unintentional spelling errors though. Nothing to major, just something stupid like I'd end up doing...like replacing hand for hard. Still it's a good take on the many stories in the Inuyasha universe.
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Reviewed By: InusBasket [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 11:45 CST
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Nice story! Update soon!
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