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Reviewed By: seatravelernine On: April 16, 2007 18:02 CDT
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i don't like what you did with kagome... i know that she doesn't have a very defined character in the manga but you totally got ignored the baseline. it doesn't feel like a fanfic of inuyasha, but something unrelated.
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Title: kagome one
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 12:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
damnit write more 1 of the best stories ever pleaseeeeee
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Reviewed By: SacredFourLoves On: April 01, 2007 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really good! Please update soon!
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Title: short bus
Reviewed By: aim On: March 22, 2007 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn your good keep writeing i want 4 more chapters by tomorrow ok thanx bye
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it a lot, but did you have to portray his arm with gashes the size of Rhode Island? besides, It's still really good update sooooon plz!!!
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS ETORY IS FUCKIN AWSOME WHY IS IT TAKING YOU DO LONG TO UPLOAD PLZ PLZ PLZ UPLOAD SOON
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Title: tyler
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you did write four chapters and inuyasha didn't drve me crazy yet i am still in love with this story so write more ok bye
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story please update soon i've been waiting for a long time its so funny
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Reviewed By: b@by_@nime On: February 22, 2007 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks i love it. keep on writing man this story is so kool man i just can't explain how much i love it (*jumping up and down with an inuyasha poster*)
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 11:15 CST
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Alright I'll stop annoying you about them doing more. It's a great story and I understand that you want to keep it a teen rating. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 15:51 CST
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I still want more! Though my boyfriend and I have never played 'Extreme Footsie' before, maybe I should try. . .
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Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: February 10, 2007 14:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Awsome. I agree with InuYasha at this moment, actually. Make them do more than just kissing!
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Reviewed By: x3Underwaterx3 On: February 07, 2007 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story!! its great! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 14:59 CST
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This is an awsome story. It links way too much into my love life for my liking though. People continously call me a 'cutter' and my current boyfriend is a lot like InuYasha, but that's not your fault so continue writing and updating!
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Title: Tyler
Reviewed By: codex On: February 04, 2007 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so you took my advice huh well you go girl i am proud of you but don't think this gets you off the hook c'mon write the next four chapters now. kagome-yeah i wanna know what happens with me and inuyasha inuyasha-yeah and do we kiss then well you know we start to well kagome-pervert sit sit sit see even those two want to read what happens so c'mon on with da story i'm gettin inpatiant here because this is a great story and you can't do this to your readers rihgt kagome? kagome-hell yeah inuyasha- you better hury up and finish kagome- inuyasha honey inuyasha- y-y-yeah kagome kagome-sit see what i mean c'mon pleaseeeeeeeeeeee i really love this story beacause you are a good writer right guys? kagome and inuyasha-yeah ''pouts'' well alright thats all i got to say for now bye. oh and don't forget four chapters tonight i'll come back and see and if they are done if there not done inuyasha is going to drive me crazy and i'm gonna have to go to the anime insane asylem thanx bye. inuyasha-hey i don't make people crazy so piss of me-inuyasha shut up inuyasha-aint nothin doin me and kagome-inuyasha sit boy kagome,me,and inuyasha-bye!!!!
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