| "Short Bus" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Title: nice
Reviewed By: Princess Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2007 05:16 CST
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Love the story, i feel that it deals with what some teen and even adults deal with. I know personaly what you are have kagome go throught. Trust me i lived that life for over 15 years. with a jerk that treated me like crap and everything and then dropped me after he said we would still be friends after everything that has happened, for the girl (I am being nice) that he married after only dateing her for about 6 months after not being together for more that 5 years. Trust me I feel for what you have her going throught. and as a side note, you can several scar your self with a safety pin
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG KAGOME AND INUYASHA DID THE NASTY!!! KAGOME'S NOT INTO IT...WHY? AND I KNOW INUYASHA AIN'T NO VIRGIN!!! WELL N-E WAYS GREAT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON PLZ
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Reviewed By: SeriouslyGir [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2007 21:23 CDT
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Can't wait until your next update- I like the story.
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Reviewed By: star_struck [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maegan baby! what's up? I love the story, and I know that you can't update now due to work and comp. restriction, but I am getting really restless! Guess what else?!? I am out now! How is max? lol you skank jk well, I g2g, -kirsten
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Reviewed By: kitsunegirl48 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 13:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Soon, k? I like this fan-fic bunches - and can't wait to see what Inu's gonna 'demand' of Kag -- or if she'll finally grow a BACK BONE and 'tear him a new one'
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Reviewed By: SacredFourLoves On: May 18, 2007 20:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay them...the end of that last chapter was weird but I loved it!!! Please write more ~*~
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Reviewed By: goldwings2 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 13:41 CDT
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this is a good story so update soon.
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, please update soon.And anyhow, what's wrong with JROTC? huh huh? I'm in AFJROTC so *sticks out tounge* lol j/k please update soon.thanx
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Reviewed By: seatravelernine On: April 16, 2007 18:02 CDT
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i don't like what you did with kagome... i know that she doesn't have a very defined character in the manga but you totally got ignored the baseline. it doesn't feel like a fanfic of inuyasha, but something unrelated.
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Title: kagome one
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 12:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
damnit write more 1 of the best stories ever pleaseeeeee
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Reviewed By: SacredFourLoves On: April 01, 2007 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really good! Please update soon!
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Title: short bus
Reviewed By: aim On: March 22, 2007 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn your good keep writeing i want 4 more chapters by tomorrow ok thanx bye
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it a lot, but did you have to portray his arm with gashes the size of Rhode Island? besides, It's still really good update sooooon plz!!!
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS ETORY IS FUCKIN AWSOME WHY IS IT TAKING YOU DO LONG TO UPLOAD PLZ PLZ PLZ UPLOAD SOON
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Title: tyler
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you did write four chapters and inuyasha didn't drve me crazy yet i am still in love with this story so write more ok bye
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story please update soon i've been waiting for a long time its so funny
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Reviewed By: b@by_@nime On: February 22, 2007 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks i love it. keep on writing man this story is so kool man i just can't explain how much i love it (*jumping up and down with an inuyasha poster*)
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 11:15 CST
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Alright I'll stop annoying you about them doing more. It's a great story and I understand that you want to keep it a teen rating. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 15:51 CST
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I still want more! Though my boyfriend and I have never played 'Extreme Footsie' before, maybe I should try. . .
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Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: February 10, 2007 14:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Awsome. I agree with InuYasha at this moment, actually. Make them do more than just kissing!
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Reviewed By: x3Underwaterx3 On: February 07, 2007 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story!! its great! UPDATE SOON!
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