| "Short Bus" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: goldwings2 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 13:41 CDT
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this is a good story so update soon.
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 06:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, please update soon.And anyhow, what's wrong with JROTC? huh huh? I'm in AFJROTC so *sticks out tounge* lol j/k please update soon.thanx
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Reviewed By: seatravelernine On: April 16, 2007 18:02 CDT
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i don't like what you did with kagome... i know that she doesn't have a very defined character in the manga but you totally got ignored the baseline. it doesn't feel like a fanfic of inuyasha, but something unrelated.
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Title: kagome one
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 12:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
damnit write more 1 of the best stories ever pleaseeeeee
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Reviewed By: SacredFourLoves On: April 01, 2007 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is really good! Please update soon!
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Title: short bus
Reviewed By: aim On: March 22, 2007 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn your good keep writeing i want 4 more chapters by tomorrow ok thanx bye
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it a lot, but did you have to portray his arm with gashes the size of Rhode Island? besides, It's still really good update sooooon plz!!!
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 19:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS ETORY IS FUCKIN AWSOME WHY IS IT TAKING YOU DO LONG TO UPLOAD PLZ PLZ PLZ UPLOAD SOON
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Title: tyler
Reviewed By: kagome one [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok you did write four chapters and inuyasha didn't drve me crazy yet i am still in love with this story so write more ok bye
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Reviewed By: nime_bby [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story please update soon i've been waiting for a long time its so funny
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Reviewed By: b@by_@nime On: February 22, 2007 11:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story rocks i love it. keep on writing man this story is so kool man i just can't explain how much i love it (*jumping up and down with an inuyasha poster*)
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 11:15 CST
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Alright I'll stop annoying you about them doing more. It's a great story and I understand that you want to keep it a teen rating. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: shikiori [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 15:51 CST
Comment/Review:
I still want more! Though my boyfriend and I have never played 'Extreme Footsie' before, maybe I should try. . .
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Reviewed By: shikiori(nsi) On: February 10, 2007 14:17 CST
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Awsome. I agree with InuYasha at this moment, actually. Make them do more than just kissing!
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Reviewed By: x3Underwaterx3 On: February 07, 2007 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story!! its great! UPDATE SOON!
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