| "Heavy Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: mitsumeteiteyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2011 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your stories! Not only have I read Heavy Bond, but I have also read To Hell Together, Come Together, and Playing Home. I started reading and I couldn't stop ^_^ Thank you for truly portraying the characters in a GREAT way without sacrificing story and romance ::Swoon:: I hope you write more DBZ fics in the future and I just wanted to say thanks! Keep up the great work ^_^ |
Reviewed By: mitsumeteiteyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2011 21:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your stories! Not only have I read Heavy Bond, but I have also read To Hell Together, Come Together, and Playing Home. I started reading and I couldn't stop ^_^ Thank you for truly portraying the characters in a GREAT way without sacrificing story and romance ::Swoon:: I hope you write more DBZ fics in the future and I just wanted to say thanks! Keep up the great work ^_^ |
Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:01 EDT
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awesome fic!^^...i liked the yaoi...i would've liked 2 c kakarott pregnant but it wz still really nice^^
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 21:11 EDT
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I really enjoyed reading your fic, and very good job on the ending.
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Title: I LOVED IT ALL
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 18:55 EDT
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awww Velari and Bardock is together thats sweet. well you did a very good job writting Heavy Bond. i really enjoyed reading your work so thanks and have a good one kay.
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Title: SO FREAKIN HOT
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 18:27 EDT
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OMGOSH that was hot i loved the 15th chapter, now i'm going to read the very last chapter *sniff sniff*
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 17:58 EDT
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update
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 13:53 EDT
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read and i loved it. keep writting its gettin so good.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 20:38 EDT
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Yay you updated thank you very much, and since i'm still in shcool i'll read this when i get home, if my mom isn't on the computer. so i'll send you your review monday kay. yay i just can't wait til i read it i just know it'll be good so no worries ^_^.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 18:03 EDT
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Update
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Reviewed By: Vegeta_whirl_girl On: March 17, 2007 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! 2 chappies at once! Then it ends with a cliff-hanger... so we wait with high expectation for the next chapter. Soon, yes?
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Reviewed By: Takaouto On: March 15, 2007 15:03 EDT
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Juoda is so damn cute. -snuggles- I like your writing style too, and the plot is OMGGREAT XDDDD
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 22:30 EDT
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what an evil cliffy i want more! great chappie
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Title: ooh Kakarott and Vegeta in a cave all alone. whats going to happen now? dun dun dun
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 20:39 EDT
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i'm glad Kakarott is okay, but i wonder how vegeta is going to get kakarott to trust him. i loved the last two chapters and i want more. so update when you can kay ^_^.
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Title: Ginia
Reviewed By: ginia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable story. I hope your beta reader finishes up with more chapters soon - I'm really looking forward to additional chaps! Great story line.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 12:13 EST
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this was great please update i want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 09:18 EST
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good addition it was interesting can't wait to see more!
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Title: this was great
Reviewed By: mel1988 On: March 01, 2007 18:55 EST
Comment/Review:
update
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Reviewed By: tamie On: March 01, 2007 18:43 EST
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loved it so keep going
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Reviewed By: jujubean On: March 01, 2007 18:42 EST
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can't wait til the next chapter, this was great
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Reviewed By: Vegeta_whirl_girl On: March 01, 2007 05:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and interesting drawing of the characters. It's been so much fun to read, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: mel1988 On: February 26, 2007 18:26 EST
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loved the fight keep updating pretty pretty please
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Reviewed By: marevil On: February 26, 2007 18:24 EST
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this was really good, and i hope Kakarott is okay anyway please write more
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 18:22 EST
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i was really bored in class, i loved the fight, and i'm glad that Vegeta came around i just hope Kakarott feels better. update soon as you can kay
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 07:17 EST
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Damn good fight lol! Vageta deserved every punch but you can't say he hasn't learned his lesson. Poor Velari though, it looks like he's getting assed out. Oh well can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 18:58 EST
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wow I was really wondering how you were going to pull yourself out of chap 7 and make this vegeta/kakarott, I think you did nicely! the last few chapters were great keep it up!
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Reviewed By: lebeat5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 18:16 EST
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Just got done reading all 8 caps,this is really great can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: marevil On: February 21, 2007 17:36 EST
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this is great keep going please
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Reviewed By: tamie On: February 19, 2007 17:38 EST
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i wander whats going to happen next
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Reviewed By: jujubean On: February 19, 2007 17:37 EST
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i can't wait til the next chapter.
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