| "Heavy Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Title: this was great
Reviewed By: mel1988 On: March 01, 2007 18:55 EST
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update
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Reviewed By: tamie On: March 01, 2007 18:43 EST
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loved it so keep going
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Reviewed By: jujubean On: March 01, 2007 18:42 EST
Comment/Review:
can't wait til the next chapter, this was great
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Reviewed By: Vegeta_whirl_girl On: March 01, 2007 05:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story and interesting drawing of the characters. It's been so much fun to read, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: mel1988 On: February 26, 2007 18:26 EST
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loved the fight keep updating pretty pretty please
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Reviewed By: marevil On: February 26, 2007 18:24 EST
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this was really good, and i hope Kakarott is okay anyway please write more
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 18:22 EST
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i was really bored in class, i loved the fight, and i'm glad that Vegeta came around i just hope Kakarott feels better. update soon as you can kay
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 07:17 EST
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Damn good fight lol! Vageta deserved every punch but you can't say he hasn't learned his lesson. Poor Velari though, it looks like he's getting assed out. Oh well can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 18:58 EST
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wow I was really wondering how you were going to pull yourself out of chap 7 and make this vegeta/kakarott, I think you did nicely! the last few chapters were great keep it up!
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Reviewed By: lebeat5 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 18:16 EST
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Just got done reading all 8 caps,this is really great can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: marevil On: February 21, 2007 17:36 EST
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this is great keep going please
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Reviewed By: tamie On: February 19, 2007 17:38 EST
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i wander whats going to happen next
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Reviewed By: jujubean On: February 19, 2007 17:37 EST
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i can't wait til the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 15:45 EST
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i read all three chapter in class and it was great so write more.
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Reviewed By: mel1988 On: February 19, 2007 15:44 EST
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this was great write mor more more please
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