| "Heavy Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 22:01 EDT
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awesome fic!^^...i liked the yaoi...i would've liked 2 c kakarott pregnant but it wz still really nice^^
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 21:11 EDT
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I really enjoyed reading your fic, and very good job on the ending.
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Title: I LOVED IT ALL
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 18:55 EDT
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awww Velari and Bardock is together thats sweet. well you did a very good job writting Heavy Bond. i really enjoyed reading your work so thanks and have a good one kay.
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Title: SO FREAKIN HOT
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 18:27 EDT
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OMGOSH that was hot i loved the 15th chapter, now i'm going to read the very last chapter *sniff sniff*
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 17:58 EDT
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update
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 13:53 EDT
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read and i loved it. keep writting its gettin so good.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 20:38 EDT
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Yay you updated thank you very much, and since i'm still in shcool i'll read this when i get home, if my mom isn't on the computer. so i'll send you your review monday kay. yay i just can't wait til i read it i just know it'll be good so no worries ^_^.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 18:03 EDT
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Update
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Reviewed By: Vegeta_whirl_girl On: March 17, 2007 02:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! 2 chappies at once! Then it ends with a cliff-hanger... so we wait with high expectation for the next chapter. Soon, yes?
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Reviewed By: Takaouto On: March 15, 2007 15:03 EDT
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Juoda is so damn cute. -snuggles- I like your writing style too, and the plot is OMGGREAT XDDDD
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 22:30 EDT
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what an evil cliffy i want more! great chappie
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Title: ooh Kakarott and Vegeta in a cave all alone. whats going to happen now? dun dun dun
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 20:39 EDT
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i'm glad Kakarott is okay, but i wonder how vegeta is going to get kakarott to trust him. i loved the last two chapters and i want more. so update when you can kay ^_^.
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Title: Ginia
Reviewed By: ginia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 20:45 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very enjoyable story. I hope your beta reader finishes up with more chapters soon - I'm really looking forward to additional chaps! Great story line.
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Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 12:13 EST
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this was great please update i want to know what happens next.
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Reviewed By: ~JuSt-An_OuTcAsT~ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 09:18 EST
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good addition it was interesting can't wait to see more!
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