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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Desyl On: January 11, 2012 12:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD, I HATE THAT STUPID BITCH! ARG!LOL, you got me hating and raging on that girl who done horrible things and was gonna buy his time. I go in there and slap her!! |
Reviewed By: SlightlyCreepy On: January 16, 2010 21:30 EST
Comment/Review:
i really hope you havnt given up on this fic... it was updated a long time ago.. v~v i really do adore it -fell in love with it- -looks through your other fanfiction- -dragging feet- meh
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Reviewed By: Weissangel24 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2009 00:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I just spent the whole weekend reading this fic for it to end in a cliffie like that! :: screams :: I hope you update this story quickly! The twins are finally on the same page! (kinda) Very nice read! Full of angst! There are a lot of spelling mistakes/typos in there. If you ever have time, you might want to re-read and correct them. ^-^ Read ja next time!
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Reviewed By: ineedyou22 On: July 26, 2009 01:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love your story very much! I've been checking everyday for a new chapter. Please continue! PLEALEEEESE? :D
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2009 23:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I sincerely hope that you will update soon. T.T I want to read more and it has been a while since you have updated. Oh and if you ever need a beta i would like to help.
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: jlawrence On: March 17, 2009 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I've been checking this site every... single... day... for the next post! The kiss scene between the twins was amazing. The last couple chapters made me so sad/close-to-crying (as they are supposed to) but even with the bad things happening in this chapter, things are starting to get so much better! I'm so happy that you're still committed to the book.
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Reviewed By: stomovcsik On: March 15, 2009 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel as though this is going to take you forever to update again, BUT, i will check in everyday to see if you have written it yet. :) Your the only fanfic writer i have ever stayed interested in this long. Yay for you! So please, update soon!! (no rushing though, i want your work to be as good as always)
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Title: I'm stoked, really!
Reviewed By: Stephanie Tomovcsik On: December 26, 2008 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first, sorry for the 9. But a word WAS missing a letter (That word happens to be 'tray', you wrote 'try') just wanted to point that out ANYWHO! Your fanfic is so addicting, everyday (if i have internet) i check to see if you updated yet. You dont know how much my day has improved when i came to see that you DID! Your a brilliant writer, please continue with your crazy awesome skills of entertainment. And let your BETA know that she has much love for fixing whatever you could have harmed in your brainstorm. Au Revoir Mademoiselle
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Reviewed By: silentnight On: October 26, 2008 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the most heartbreaking yet perversely fascinating story i have ever read. im so glad to see an update. i can't wait for the reunion!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Miha-Mizu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE YOU!!! THIS STORY IS THE BEST!! All the angst, like you can really feel what he's going through.
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: Miha-Mizu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 00:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DON'T LET KAORU DIE!!!! Even though its like deja vu all over again DONT LET HIM DIE *sniffle*
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Reviewed By: RandomPerson5 On: May 17, 2008 22:48 EDT
Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. The character development is amazing and you've made everyone seem realistic without taking away from the plot. As a side comment, I was listening to The Deep End by Scary Kids Scaring Kids and noticed that a lot of the song's lyrics fit your story very well [changing the she's to he's of course]. Anyway, hope you update soon. ~Midnight
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Title: oooh man
Reviewed By: liz663 On: April 26, 2008 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOH man is this chapter sexy! I read it the first day you posted it. In fact I was probably the first person to read it. That's how much I love your story xD. I'll refresh the page till I see UPDATED next to the title. Wonderful job as always and I can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 21:57 EDT
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oooo man!!!! shit man!!! good job around...sorry that i couldnt read it the day it was updated...i get in moods to read...and todays the day for fixated...man am i glad that i did...damn!
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Title: D:
Reviewed By: Liz663 On: March 13, 2008 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY! I'm always on edge to see what you'll come up with next. I'm sad to hear you wont be updating any time soon but I'll look foward to it. Hopefully we'll hear from you during spring break ^_^. Good luck with everything!
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