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Title: Queen of the universe?
Reviewed By: Rabia On: February 26, 2008 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm incredibly fond of this story. So much build-up... You've actually given me palpitations. I've only ever been able to find ouran twincest stories as established relationship(bland) and complete and total implausible get-togethers(arg). This ones really one of the most realistic... but I'm still very much confused about the crossdressing. Does he want to or no? It's been bothering me quite a bit. I'm sure you've worked it in to do with the masochism but really it wasn't explained that much so it still gives me a bit of an uneasy feeling. Where as most of your story just has me on edge wondering about much next the crossdressing issue distracts me a bit from the bigger issues. ;p. Rant over. Love I This Story! Continue please~~~! Rabia(Y-Gallery)
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 20:18 EST
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another awesome chapter!!!! i think near is cute and rapeable too but im not into shota...but to each his/her own...and about the printing...i kinda stopped b/c im not going to school b/c im taking a break and so that means no free lazer printing...plus i dont think i can print anything out at my new job so that means no free lazer again...but to answer your question i stopped at stage 3 destructive personality part 7 and i had plan on printing the rest...i just forgot to remember what the formate is for how i like to read it...but also remember i have my pages set to 1/2" margins on arial size 10...oh and also i have the spacing set between the paragraphs at 12 pt i think... anyways with the chapters up to that much plus a cover page...i am left with 106 pages total and i still have more room to go b/c i dont have it up-to-date like i am reading...but eventually ill get back into printing it so please do not delete this in the near future...so with that said and done...i cant wait for the finally even thou i dont want this to end...but as a wise man once said...all good things shall come to an end...and with that i bid you ado
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 17:09 EST
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Oh the suspence! D: This was a good chapter, you left us all wanting more! :P Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Bet its gonna be good. >D
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Reviewed By: MissTerie On: January 22, 2008 16:27 EST
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XD at last! its the one ive been waiting for lol. great chapter, cant wait till the next one =D
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Reviewed By: Rachel123 On: January 20, 2008 00:37 EST
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Where are you? :'( It's the chapter I have been waiting for....
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Reviewed By: TraumVonNacht On: December 24, 2007 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude...yesssss.....continue please, I love this story so much! please, please continue...
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 02:02 EST
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good job i cant wait for the rest of the story to fall into place...i have a feeling that kao wont go to the states after the party...and about the ana and nao i really didnt catch that but it all makes sense now...they just dont want to be the only ones in the world to have that kind of relationship...they want to prove that they are not insane to themselves...
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Jack Lawrence On: December 07, 2007 12:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I've been waiting sooooo long to finally read the next chapter! I've checked every day! I really liked the part when Kaoru was wet and Hikaru held him. I'm still wondering though why Hikaru didn't say anything about kaoru's "wet dream". Also, it's interesting that Hikaru was so pissed at him but was still really sweet and caring toward him. I'm surprised nether of them ether one: freaked out and like kicked the other one off the bed or two: made out. they should discuss kaoru's "whorish" behavior. He just needs to make up for hikaru not showing any affection. Also, it seems like most of the host club know what's really going on and that they like eachother. Why haven't they said anything?
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 12:11 EST
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Wow. =D Nice twist, I didn't see that coming at all. This is gonna be good. Who knows that could happen at the party! >3
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Reviewed By: Ciia On: December 06, 2007 17:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi, didn't you say that they were gonna hook up in this chappie? Maw... You HAVE to udate sooon!!! The chapter was terrific. M-hm. Much love. I love screaming/slapping-scenes... ^^ They're so deliciously angry. And I loved it when Kaoru said "I've fucked Nekozawa, I've fucked Tamaki AND I've fucked Chika!etc.." That was awsome. And that he actually slapped Hikaru? Did NOT expect that one... Hikaru shouldn't have hitten back. Thought I understand his pain and anger. Must be hard for him to have such a slutty younger brother. (I'm on Kaoru's side, I don't think he's a slut, but hey - I can understand why Hikaru feels that way. I mean the guy sleeps with anyone who's willing.) Jeez... And HA!! I knew Hunny had a thing w/ Takashi! ^^ That's cute. I really really can't wait until the next chapter! Update as soon as possible, ne? Hugglets!
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 11:16 EST
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Great Chapter of course, but one question, what happened to the foreign females? Did I just miss that or something? They can stay gone, anyways, I really didn't like them much :)
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 18:57 EDT
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yay!!! not as good as your other chappies but still good none the less...great job...i cant wait!
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gahhh!!! Suspense!!! It's killing me! *Drops on the ground, twitches a little, then dies* U-huh, you killed me with your suspense. Luckily for you, I'm immortal so I'll still be here for the next chapter! (laughs evilly) Please, PLEASE!! Update as soon as possible! I can't deny that I liked this chapter, a lot! But really... Kaoru is really starting to behave like a whore. Sleeping with two different guys in such a short period of time... And Hikaru just happens to overhear him when Kaoru's in his slutty mood. Damn it, why does Kaoru always have such rotten luck? And what the hell is it with Hunny? Why did he let Kaoru kiss him?! Oh god, don't tell me he's actually IN LOVE with Kaoru? I thought he was together with Mori-chan? Cos that'd be awsome (According to me.) Aaanyways! Keep it up and update soon! This is getting extremely good!
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 12:07 EDT
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Karou your such an idiot. -_- I hope Hikaru doesn't murder him. D: And poor Hunny is like... wtf just happened? xDDDD
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Reviewed By: Rosekikilola [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 19:50 EDT
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KYAA!!!!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!! HOT! ok so now i have to wait and wonder what hikaru is going to do or say after he catches kaoru.... somthing big is going to happen in next chapter? WHAT?! I need to know!!! by the way i loved kaoru's outfit for this chappter i hope things start to get better soon and hikaru better confess! anyway a great chapter as always! ^_^
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