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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 01:56 EDT
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wow... I wonder what Hikaru will think when Kaoru comes home tired with his clothes all wrinkled. Especially after what the foreign girls said. CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! also I wonder where Kaora is gonna hide the vibrator... I mean it BRIGHT freakin pink. wonder what Hikaru would do if he saw it.
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 01:55 EDT
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wow... I wonder what Hikaru will think when Kaoru comes home tired with his clothes all wrinkled. Especially after what the foreign girls said. CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! also I wonder where Kaora is gonna hide the vibrator... I mean it BRIGHT freakin pink. wonder what Hikaru would do if he saw it.
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 17:34 EDT
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Holy fuck... *nosebleed* Excellent chapter! Very hot lemon... or lime, or whatever it was... Good job! ^^ And I loved the way you described Hikaru's feelings... "They make me want you." was really nicely done! And I kinda like the naughty sms's. I'm already looking forward to ch 18! *chu*
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 03:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful chapter! Kaoru is so naughty! xDD And don't we all just love it?! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 20:03 EDT
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That was great, me loving the Neko/Kaoru pairing, then having them split with no real action :P Love the story.
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Reviewed By: Rosekikilola [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 18:41 EDT
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Yay! Vibrater! Chika needs to have a boyfriend now but who? ......i'll have to wait to find out won't i? Oh well Hikaru is starting to want Kaoru! YAY!! I can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 00:08 EDT
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Aaw, sweetie. You're the best! You wrote me something happy. *sends hug* Sure, it was sad that they broke up, but Nekozawa was being so sweet about it... and now Kaoru's single. *snigger* So I'm thrilled! Update soon! :D (p.s. please kill Anamé. I hate her so much.^^)
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 05:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw. T-T So sad. I think this may be one of my fav chapters. Neko is so sweet. Kaoru is finally accepting his feelings. Can't wait to see whats gonna happen in the next chapter. :3
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2007 14:45 EDT
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that was really depressing...i hope you will have smut to make up...or there will be a price to pay... well, well done for today...i love every chapter and can never wait for the next one...i almost dont want this to end...its too good of a story...
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! I love Hikarus temper. He is so possesive. And yay! Twin kisses! xD I can't wait to see how the parents react to Karous secret. I eagerly await the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ashtonreed(nli) On: July 31, 2007 03:23 EDT
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OMG!!! I wonder what other kind of msgs theyve sent Hikaru. Cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rosekikilola [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 20:53 EDT
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Yay! things are moving along! Hikaru's anger reached a new level in that one. I can't wait to see how the news to the parents and the date will go! Keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 16:30 EDT
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Loved it, as usual ;-) Hihi. I'm kinda glad things are looking brighter, even though it's just a little. I'm honestly getting a little depressed reading this fic. Everything seems to go the wrong way for poor Kaoru, and I hate Anamé so fucking much!!! I loved the two kisses... but now I'm worried about what Nekozawa will say when he figures out who Kaoru really loves... Just... Please! Make me a happy ending, ne? Or I will probably cry my eyes out. (I'm serious, young lady!) ^^ The shower scene with Kaoru was hott (even though he panicked after cumming...) Any way, update a.s.a.p, ok? And for the love of god, write something happy for once, okay? *snigger* You're a great writer you know. Make me happy. ^^ *chu*
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 14:45 EDT
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yummy!!!! omg omg omg omg omg omg omg i love it!!!!! cant wait for the next update!!!1
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Title: lol,n/m
Reviewed By: Steph... On: July 27, 2007 17:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My computer was being dumb, never mind. off to read ch.14. :D
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