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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 16:17 EDT
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Woah. o_O Didn't see that coming. Though it adds to the story a lot, it explains why Kaoru never told those girls off. Hikaru sure was being mean! But he said sorry so I guess its alright. xD Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Bennn On: August 21, 2007 12:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very fun to read ^^ Hope you update soon~ By the way, I hope Anamé dies. Rofl. xD
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omfg!!! :D Hunny caught them!! Dear lord, update soooon! This was the best chapter in a long time! I loved it! Great work! *chu*
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 03:00 EDT
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I CANT WAIT READ THE NEXT CHAPTER!! I wonder how Hikaru will react to it O.O he'll be pissed that someone tried to take his Kaoru, even worse that it was forcibly. And what would he think, knowing that Kaoru likes dominant guys. I wonder why Hikaru doesnt just look through Kaoru's phone while he's sleeping or something. So their mom is okay with Kaoru being gay, but Im almost afraid to know how their parents would act if Hika & Kao were together.
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: white_hawk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 01:57 EDT
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thanks for replying to my review, and I thought that she bitches fit them quite nicely, and YAY! an update! And ZoMg they kissed...kinda...Kaoru only wants to kiss Hikaru! and my I think Hunny is gonna go all wide-eyed and then glomp his brother...LOL...well maybe not the part about him forcing himself on Kaoru...naughty boy that one...I can't wait til they get together, I can see that it's just starting to kill Hikaru inside!
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 21:26 EDT
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I love this fic! Mostly because you actually update ^^
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 21:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get the feeling Hunny isn't going to freak out to bad cause he is well... Hunny. lol I like this chapter. ^__^ Cause Hika and Kao seem to be getting closer.
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 20:41 EDT
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o jeez....man that was great!!!!!...cant wait for your next update...
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Reviewed By: Rosekikilola [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 16:41 EDT
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't belive you stopped the chapter right there!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They got caught what's Hunny going to do?!?!?! I HAVE TO KNOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wow that was a really great chapter I like Chika! Anyway hope you update again soon because I am dying to know what's going to happen. Keep up the wonderful writing!!!
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Title: I NEED more!
Reviewed By: white_hawk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...I've been reading this story all day, and now after that smexiness there's no more chapters! (cries dramatically) You know I understand why Kaoru feels bad and all, but I feel the worse for Hikaru throughout this entire thing. Because it's SOOOO obvious he wants him to, even before the two she-bitches started sending him those texts...and sad Kaoru makes me sad...I wish they would just fuck and get it over with! LOL I hope that they get together soon! you are a big tease! LOL Oh and I love the Chu's...they make me so happy cuz it makes me think of Loveless and then I just go..awwwww anyways update soon! I'll luv you forever!
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 01:56 EDT
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wow... I wonder what Hikaru will think when Kaoru comes home tired with his clothes all wrinkled. Especially after what the foreign girls said. CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! also I wonder where Kaora is gonna hide the vibrator... I mean it BRIGHT freakin pink. wonder what Hikaru would do if he saw it.
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 01:55 EDT
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wow... I wonder what Hikaru will think when Kaoru comes home tired with his clothes all wrinkled. Especially after what the foreign girls said. CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!!! also I wonder where Kaora is gonna hide the vibrator... I mean it BRIGHT freakin pink. wonder what Hikaru would do if he saw it.
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 17:34 EDT
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Holy fuck... *nosebleed* Excellent chapter! Very hot lemon... or lime, or whatever it was... Good job! ^^ And I loved the way you described Hikaru's feelings... "They make me want you." was really nicely done! And I kinda like the naughty sms's. I'm already looking forward to ch 18! *chu*
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 03:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful chapter! Kaoru is so naughty! xDD And don't we all just love it?! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 20:03 EDT
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That was great, me loving the Neko/Kaoru pairing, then having them split with no real action :P Love the story.
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