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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 17:41 EDT
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OMG i was cracking up in my basement when i read the part where they have to go in the mansion adn how tsunade just was talking then suddenly fell asleep. (OH and i love how naruto's pants are hanging low on his hips, you hsould havve someone draw a picture of it and post it on deviant or here) laters smiles and walks off
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 17:32 EDT
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i love the part where he's talking to Kyuubi in his room and kyuubi keeps calling him his kit. and then the fuzzy redglowingpicture of him curling aorund narut soooooo kaiwaiii!!! I absolutely love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: armybrat14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 15:17 EDT
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hey i javen't read your story and i don't think i will just because i don't really care for sex scenes which yours sounds like to have alot of. i just wanted to ask u to please edit your summary! i saw it and i fell off my chair!!! kids come on this site and i think it's a really bad influence on them if they see that kind of stuff, so just cool it off a little and put something like "yaoi-lemon", thank u!
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Reviewed By: Dream Keeper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 21:46 EDT
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I liked that chapter. The sex scene may not have turned out the way YOU wanted it to, but it still was pretty good I thought. Update again soon, I really like this story. I can't wait til the others realize what Naruto and Shika were doing! ^_^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 17:47 EDT
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WooHoo that was H O T... Shika and Naruto make a great couple!!! Is Shika Naruto's mate I mean the biting and all??? Well nice chap..can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Gacktluvr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 16:50 EDT
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YAy, Shika finally got some! ><
I love Naruto and Shika together! ^^ Great story, I hope you update soon! :)
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Title: WOWSA!!
Reviewed By: rayangel911 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 19:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was soooooooooooooooooooo goood well just wanted to say that was one of the best stories i've ever read!! so KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 22:10 EDT
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I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER! THIS IS GREAT! Good job with them. This is gonna be really good!
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Reviewed By: Zirra Nova [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 13:58 EDT
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Hmm...This is interesting so far, and that whole thing with the parents sure does blow... >..> Hmm...*sigh* I can't deny it anymore..I'm a hentai-fangirl... *large smirk* But it's okay as long as I can find fafics like this.. Please update as soon as you can....I suggest a password protecting your files.. -..^ Ja Ne, Zirra ^..^
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Reviewed By: Hope4love92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 16:23 EDT
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Can't wait til you upload this story and like everybody else said having Naruto as a sex god good ideal.
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Title: Ouchies!
Reviewed By: coriel-leigh On: March 09, 2007 12:41 EST
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Yuck. Parents should learn to MIND THEIR OWN BUSINESS!!!!! I feel for you... And, I hope you keep writing. Must have more... need more.
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Reviewed By: NejixLee [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 21:26 EST
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It's good to know your continuing >.< I need more Love it, can't wait to see whose naruto next prey
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Reviewed By: PARTYGIRL101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 20:13 EST
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fucking love this fanfic! keep it up!
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Title: Howdie!
Reviewed By: carolsi13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 09:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I'm new here, and really like your story.I'm an absolute fan of yaoi and yummy lemons(real ones too!)! I certainly hope you'll be able to continue the story and have already gotten ideas for torturing your parents (e.g. voodoo dolls). Update,update,update!
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Title: Itai !
Reviewed By: Mixed-Starz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 08:25 EST
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Man! I can't remember how much time I have visited this fanfic and its still not updated! Please please please! Update for the sake of kami! Caux I am your lovely no.1 fanfic fans! (do pose like Gai) UPDATE AR! JUX FOR THE SAKE OF OTHER FANS AND KAMI AND ME LORX!!! >_
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