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Reviewed By: Kirara_Cutie316 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awsome story, awsome plot, awsome grammar(which is not always common) what more is there to say? update soon please!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like this chapter, hope you update and keep it up. Peace.
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Reviewed By: miley On: February 11, 2007 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the new chapter.please update soon.TTFN!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was good, I liked it. Hope you update and keep it up this is a great story.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another good chapter. Inuyasha really knows how to push kagome's buttons, doesn't he? LOL. Two people with such hair trigger tempers....this will definitely be fun. On a sadder note, Inuyasha's background sounds like it was anything but happy. I can't wait to see what the back story is on him. Something awful must have happened to turn him so bitter and hurt. I'll definitely be looking for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: sublimetrickster [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 18:13 CST
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It's a very interesting story so far. I keep wondering if Kagome will ever have to face Hiten again. It also makes me want to read "Jane Eyre". I must scavange up a copy of it, I know I saw one in my house somewhere. Keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing where you're taking this.
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Reviewed By: miley On: February 09, 2007 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it.i always loved Inuyasha/Kagome stories.update asap.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 05:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this chapter it was, well it was interesting. I never read the book that this story is based on but I will one day. So hope you update and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. I really enjoyed their first meeting, even if Kagome was at a slight disadvantage, lol. I look forward to seeing them shoot sparks off each other next time. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: nindeoronra [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Hooray! You updated quickly! As for your characterization of Inuyasha and Kagome, I think you're doing a good job mixing their own personalities with that of Jane and Mr. Rochester--mind you, it's been a LONG time since I've read Jane Eyre (I'm going to have to re-read it)--but so far it seems fine to me. Now, let's get to that picnic--can't wait to see what Kagome's reaction will be. :-)
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: HollatoYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 16:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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this is a very good details. I like this and how you wrote it. Please update and keep writing.I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 07:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter. The last one WAS depressing. However, I'm glad to see that the plot seems to be unfolding now. I can wait until Inuyasha and Kagome finally speak to each other next time. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 05:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter, very well writen. And thats a good place to stop it whe she was about to meet Inuyasha. Well hope you update and keep up the good work. Peace.
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Reviewed By: nindeoronra [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 00:04 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooh! Now we're getting to the good part! Thanks for updating so quickly and I can't wait for the next part.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 04:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story you got here. I like alot, well the Sango dying part took me off guard there, I mean I knew the baby was going to die but Sango? Damn, that was strong and most of all it was unexpected, I like that. So hopefully you'll update again so everyone can read what will happen next. Peace.
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