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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 01:56 CDT
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OMG!!!!SEXY ENDING!!!!!
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Title: Very Good!
Reviewed By: sweetkijo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wanted to come in here and tell you that you have done an amazing job! I am a lil heart broken for my hanyou though...keep up the great work and thanks for taking the time to write this.
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 02:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter, please update soon...i'm dying to know what happens next...pleaaassee!
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 22:11 CDT
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wow... It was... perfect.... lol. ur lemons r hot!!! I gotz to go take an ice bath now!! lol... Update soon k?
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Title: :O Wow
Reviewed By: omegawolfempress*notloggedin* On: March 25, 2007 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great story you have going here. I found your story just the other day, and I read all 20+ chapters at once. I didn't ever want to stop to take care of things around the house. I am quite impressed with this piece and I am very excited to read more of it. Are you planning on continuing with this one or writing a completely new story as a continuation? I think you should. It would be most excellent! I did notice a few grammatical and spelling errors, but nothing that takes away from the enjoyment factor and understanding of the story. I think you did a killer job! Keep it up!
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Title: loving it but confussed
Reviewed By: KagomeReborn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i love your story being reading it happily up to chap 22 but i am confussed because if sess has waited all this time how could he be back in time.. i mean it's not making sense to me. if inu died , kag then later and naraku won then wouldn't the future be different ? i mean the shikon no tama would still be broken or by now in the hands of naraku ...anyway despite this i still like your flic and i'm heading back to continue reading. KagomeReborn out
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 02:18 CDT
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Well, the choice has been made! And, of course, it could only have turned out this way, but when she has to face Inuyasha to tell him, I'm going to have my hanky ready. Please make it as painless as possible. Since Inuyasha already knows, maybe he will will make it easier on her. *sigh* I was surprised by Sess' admission of love, but I think it was necessary for her to be ready to make that commitment, ne? Things certainly didn't go as planned, did they? Nice chapter!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 15:41 CDT
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omg... He's like a freakin word master... *melts into a puddle* that was beautiful... lol. she better choose sesshy or I'ma cry... lol. Update soon that was flippin awesome!
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie On: March 22, 2007 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter(s)!!! weeeeeeeeeee!!! lol
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Reviewed By: kawaisan On: March 22, 2007 13:17 CDT
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wow, nice triangle! couldnt have done it better myself! thanks for the frequent updates!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 01:11 CDT
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Dun dun dun dun. And the nerve-wracking, nail-biting suspense continues! Whoa! That was SOME little speech Sesshoumaru gave her. And Inuyasha couldn't come up with anything to say? Oh, yes, the "I love you" was awesome in and of itself, but couldn't he try to refute what Sess had said about Kikyo? I feel SO sorry for him, but it's looking pretty obvious where Kagome's feelings lie. This is going to hurt, isn't it?
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Title: m'hm
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 16:00 CDT
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Get it Sesshy... lol. Inuyasha should just go to hell wit Kikyou and eave Kags and Sesshy alone... yes.. that would be nice... lol. Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 07:49 CDT
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haha, wish i could have seen inuyasha's face for that one!
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Title: So wonderful!
Reviewed By: nek0hime [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This fic is progressing so steadily, and the chapters themselves log the growth of your writing! I'm glad that amongst all these... "lesser" fics, there is still genuine creativity around. Furthmore, this is such a joy to read, and I look forward to your updates! --Aiko Fujiwara
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Reviewed By: Nydanna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 02:47 CDT
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Awww man! Inuyasha just had to come back. ; ; When I read that, the first thing that popped into my mind is the term my husband and I use whenever our kids....interupt. I'm sure you're familiar with it, but I won't say it. =P Anyways, can't wait to see what happens next! Hopefully Kagome gets a happier ending then the one that she was facing.
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