| "The Telling" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Title: A beautiful fic.
Reviewed By: Aiko Fujiwara On: March 04, 2007 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic of yours is ingeniuos, and beautifully written. Many congratulations on a job thoroughly well done, and many thanks for all the enjoyment. :D Aiko
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 15:54 CST
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was it hot in that chapter or was it just me? lol. I love ur citrus.... Oh wow, I think I just admitted I'm a hentai... OH WELL! Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 18:51 CST
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yay! great story! thanks!
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Title: im sad
Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
and i was just getting into it...and it's all over....
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 13:50 CST
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YAY!! U AGREE!!! I'm happy now!! lol. This is rele good!!! YAY!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Michael23 On: March 03, 2007 00:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like the story so far and it's has an interesting plot so far. To have Kagome between the two brothers I guess. I think that Inyuasha should win Kagome over though because her feelings towards Sesshormou are more lust and not love. Inyuasha loves her and Kagome does him too so they should be together with Inyuasha getting her virginity. Love it and can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 22:43 CST
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Yeah two chapters in one day!!!
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 21:01 CST
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Love this story!! Keep up the good work!!
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 20:41 CST
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This is rele awesome... I rele like it!! Update soon. Oh and who give a fuq if the characters r a little OOC??? It's ur story and I love IT!!!
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Reviewed By: kgrube On: March 02, 2007 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story get better chapter by chapter please update soon
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Reviewed By: PancakeSnatcher On: March 01, 2007 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, there aren't more chapters up! *Sigh* I look forward to the next one. And the one after that...and the one after that....^_^ By the way, try not to get too frustrated by a lack of reviews. Your fic's only been around a couple weeks, I only saw it today, myself. Also, don't forget that MediaMiner readers are unfortunately lazy. (Let's see how many reviews I get you in protest to people being called lazy!) At any rate, I will definitely be keeping an eye on this story.
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Reviewed By: Snowfall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 07:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have a very interesting fic and I don't have a problem with Inu and Kagome having some time together. In fact, a threesome would be just fine with me. There's no reason that Sesshoumaru couldn't share. heheh. It was a very sweet interlude. I'm just hoping that you won't make Kagome and Inuyasha angry at each other in order to have her run to Sesshoumaru. OMG! Please don't kill Inu off! ^_^ Most everyone's view of Sesshoumaru says that he doesn't lose control, so that was a surprise. But your explanation helped to buffer that difference with preconceptions. Sorry if this review is choppy, but I'm not awake yet...^_^ Snow
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Reviewed By: I_luv_Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story really give its reader a mental picture and it's very well written. I have read other stories that can give me mental pic's but nothing like this one! I love it! >>M
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Reviewed By: cassandralynn30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT!!! I like the originality of the story.. Sesshy beddin a human..Cool.. Please Update soon I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: CandyEars [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 13:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ok, I'll add a review! I'm liking your story so far.. InuYasha was so close to telling his feelings too! Something always happens.. Plus I can see Sess's curiousity and dry humor definitely winning me over! :) Keep it up!
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