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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 01:37 CDT
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Oh, YES!!! That was fantastic!! Now THAT'S what a cliffhanger is supposed to look like. And you're killing me! When you write Sess, I'm all for Sess. And when you write Inu, I'm all for him. And they both LOVE her. But neither one had really told her that yet. Good golly, cut the girl in half so they can each have her. This is TOO, TOO good. Thanks for putting up another chapter so quickly! You're my new best friend.
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Reviewed By: AngelGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 13:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SOOOO HATE YOU. well not really, but how could u leave it like that. And it was getting soooooooo good. oh well i guess i have to wait for ur next update. heeheehee
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 05:27 CDT
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Wow! Awesome, baby! At first, i was so sad that Sesshoumaru was there to mess up Inuyasha's mating with her when he had been so happy when they returned through the well. Then you revealed their tragic fates. Well, heck! Sesshoumaru HAS to save her for herself, as well as for him, right? But, what is goping to happen when Inuyasha shows up? And won't losing Kagome just break him? I don't suppose you're up for a threesome? After all, Sess wouldn't have to share her long, if Inu only has about a year to live. Augh! Beautiful job!! LOVE it!
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 23:41 CDT
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warm fuzzies!!!!!!!! i always get so turned around when people mess with time, but you seem to have gotten it right!
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: March 14, 2007 19:40 CDT
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THe format of this last chapter was a little squashed, you should fix that. Why does everyone have to have Inuyasha coming out the loser in Kagome's affections? Why can't she have both her puppies and love them too? Frankly, with the amount of trouble she attracts, she'd need both of them to keep her alive. With the three of them together, Naraku would be a dead man for sure. Dare to be different and make it a threesome!!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 15:04 CDT
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It's rele good!!! omg.. did he follow her through da well? AWESOME!! lol
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 01:05 CDT
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I really liked that chapter. While there might not have been much going on, the revelation of Inuyasha's thoughts and feelings was worth it. You did a fantastic job with his realization of what he had done -- or didn't do. I LOVED it that he didn't just flip out in anger, but instead admitted to himself, and to her, that he had taken her for granted for too long. But, gosh darn it! I can't help but hope that he will get to be happy with her now. But, then again, Sesshoumaru deserves to be happy with her, too. I can't believe you're making this so difficult! No matter which brother gets her, my heart's going to break for the other one. I don't suppose they could BOTH win? Ah, well. Excellent job.
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Reviewed By: malitiadixie On: March 11, 2007 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that was amazing. I loved it alot. Not to make your head swell too much but I have read a lot of stories on this site and never have I reviewed before the story was complete. I felt the need to do it this time because I am a real hentai and I am very impressed!!! Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: gerb On: March 11, 2007 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its really good i like how ur always posting new chapters really fast keep it up
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Title: hm
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 00:11 CST
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yea. definately should of listened to u. lol. I was beggin for an ice cube before I got started.. lol. It's rele good! update soon
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Reviewed By: SerasVictoria On: March 09, 2007 02:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Just wanted to tell you that I absolutely fell for your fic. So amazing. Inuyasha's cute and all, but Sesshy's HOT! So yeah, I'm absolutely all for Sesshy and Kagome.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 22:21 CST
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i can be your beta. I am a grammar and syntax freak, comes from teaching a foreign language :) my email is kendochick@yahoo.com. i don't mind the hentai at all! keep it commin!
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 15:20 CST
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well that's good to know!! Back to the ~GOOD~ stuff eh? Well what r u waitin 4. Go write away my hentai sibling! lol.
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Reviewed By: Robby16 On: March 05, 2007 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and the Kagome is in a dilimena but come on let be poor Inyuasha who does love her and vice versa. Plus it will be funny to see Sesshorou pissed when he losesin mating Kagome. to Inyuasha
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Reviewed By: Cochrann [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 22:47 CST
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I love this story! Both lemons were great and I can see why you want to get ack to writing those.
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