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| "Such a Small World" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awesome story plz continue
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 06:21 CDT
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Great chapter! Yay! I absolutely, positively LOVE the way you're writing Jakotsu and Bankotsu. You're keeping in those little details that make him true to character, like his bloodthirstiness and his inability to count. Wonderful! Nice touch having Kikyou hit on Kouga. She's such a sleeze. I can't wait until Inuyasha finds out about her extracurricular activities. LOL!! Seriously, they're such a sick couple -- they belong on the Jerry Springer show. LOL!! Glad to see Kagome is getting a little better. And she does seem to be confident about Hiei's feelings for her. I hope she and Keiko DO get to talk soon. It might make her feel better to know that Keiko realized immediately that Yusuke was threatening her because of how she looked on the tape. Of course, finding out there IS a tape is going to open a whole new can of worms, isn't it? Loved the sweet moments with Hiei and Kagome, and I can't wait to see if they run into Inuyasha at Sesshoumaru's dinner. Actually, I can't wait to see ALL of the things you have planned for this -- it's a great read. And you're handling the large cast of characters very, very well. Kudos, my friend!
| Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait to see what happens and to see who the stranger was....XD..please update soon...
| Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon....
| Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon...this story is very good....very unique...please update
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 19:03 CDT
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I was SO happy to see a new chapter of this story! And it was a winner, too. I still don't know quite how I feel about Yusuke. He's definitely the villain of the piece, but I keep feeling tiny twinges of sympathy for him. Really tiny. Hmmm. Interesting that Kagura's blathering started Inuyasha thinking about his relationship with Kikyo. I look forward to him finding out some harsh truths. But,as always, the BEST part of the chapter was Hiei and Kagome. I DID like Hiei and Kurama talking some more, especially since that led to her discovery about Yusuke being married. Drumroll please: and there it was! The anger! The anger that she had been used to hurt someone else. Oh, yes! And this should propel her recovery, I believe, won't it? Will she seek out the other woman? Or will Keiko find her through Yukina? I'd like for the women to get a little vengeance on their own. I really liked her reaction -- and I found Hiei's interesting. He didn't want her to get in trouble or end up in jail? Seriously, he didn't really think she could actually HURT Yusuke did he? I would think he'd be afraid if she attacked Yusuke that SHE would get hurt. And now Hiei knows for sure that she didn't know Yusuke was married -- though he pretty much assumed she didn't, just from knowing her character, --I'm sure it was a relief to have that confirmed. Back to his talk with Kurama. What did he think when Kurama told him he never expected to walk in on that situation at his house? I wonder if that is going to prompt some changes, too. I couldn't believe Kurama mentioned he wouldn't have done it at Yusuke's because it wouldn't have been unexpected. Considering the state of things, that's really rather sad. I love the way you are moving everything along in this. Strange to say, but it almost looks like this whole horrible event is going to EVENTUALLY have some positive repercussions in more than one relationship. Kag/Hiei are moving to a new level of trust/security/openness -- possibly towards greater commitment. Keiko will end up (we hope) with a better, more caring man. Yusuke will either grow up or get killed. Hey! It's all win-win! Heh heh! Great job!
| Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue
| Reviewed By: FrozenTearDrop [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! yet another beautifully constructed chapter! Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is a good fic, please update, when ever possible :-)
| Reviewed By: northernmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 15:42 CST
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I confess that I've been reading this story and haven't reviewed yet...sorry! I've really enjoyed this story so far especially the dynamic between H&K. I like to believe that a relationship can recover from this type of thing. I'm also curious what you're going to do with Kurama and Keiko. Thanks for sharing your story!
| Reviewed By: FrozenTearDrop [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another awesome chapter! keep it up!
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 02:48 CST
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Another terrific chapter!! I absolutely loved the Kagome/Hiei stuff! Thank goodness they're working things out and are staying close. I like it that Kagome is starting to seem stronger to Hiei. And he told her he loves her -- Yay! And he'd still like to get his hands on Inuyasha for messing up her mind in the first place. Me, too. But, I'm looking forward to Kagome showing and feeling she is worthy of Hiei's love. So, Kikyou has been cheating on Inuyasha and he doesn't know it? Ha! Love it. I wonder who she's cheating with? And she's even thinking of picking up another guy? Hoo hoo! I can't wait for him to find out what a fool he is. Loved the tidbit about Kagura talking about being free like the wind. LOL! And Bankotsu and Sango are so good together. I agree, he's much better than Miroku. Also loved the bit about Banyruu being his lucky baseball bat. It's so great how you keep throwing in these little details from the manga/anime and making them human/normal. And, of course, Bankotsu took a picture with his cell phone! Cute scene with Rin and Sesshoumaru. And Kurama just walked right in to Hiei's bedroom and got the shock of his life. I love it that he saw the peace and contentment Hiei feels with Kagome. That was nicely written. So, what does he want to talk to Hiei about? This is really such a wonderful story, and I'm loving it more and more with each chapter. I can't wait for the next one!!
| Reviewed By: Anonymousfanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 00:26 CST
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Will Inuyasha and Kagome meet again? If so how will that go? What if Inuyasha really does love Kagome, but he went along with Kikyo's game, because perhaps he didn't really realize it, till it was to late? Does Inuayasha know about Hiei and Kagome being an item? What if Inuyasha gets the wind of what Yusuke did to Kagome, how will he react?, Feel? Will he go after Yusuke for hurting her? (that might be quite interesting.) How does Kikyo feel about Kagome? If she didn't have any problems with Kagome, then why did she and Inuyasha did what they did? If word gets around to the right people and if Kagome is well known, beloved member of town/citizen, they could get blackballed from everything from restaurants to hotels/motels, to renting movies. (Geese, ever since helping my friend with "Dynasty", I seem to be obsessed power and blackballing people.) Will Yusuke try to get Kagome again? He still has the sex tape, which Keiko and Yukina other then Yusuke knows about. It could be interesting if Inuyasha somehow gets hold of it. Maybe that's how he finds out about Yusuke forcing Kagome. Yikes, what would happen if Hiei gets the wind of this tape? How did Hiei and Kagome first met, was it before she and Inuyasha dating, during or after their breakup? What's the story between Kagome and Sesshomaru, Sesshomaru and Inuyasha? Please update ASAP.
| Reviewed By: Thief Lava [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it, I can't wait to read more
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 21:50 CST
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Awesome chapter! You really covered a lot of ground in that one. I love the way you revealed more about Kagome through Yusuke's thoughts about all the crazy people who might be gunning for him. That was so cleverly done. Loved Bankotsu and Jakotsu! You told a lot about them, too. And I was intrigued to hear that Jakotsu went after Inuyasha for hurting Kagome. Actually, now that I think about it, you told a lot about Kagome from a lot of different points of view. Kurama compared her to Keiko, and talked about her independence and the attraction she holds for Hiei. I was so intrigued by his idea that something may have to happen for her to learn to defend herself not necessarily physically, but to take up for herself). I look forward to seeing her become stronger. It's hard to see her so weak and broken and guilty. I love it that Bankotsu is wanting Kagome to stay with Hiei, AND that he wants to watch Hiei pummel Inuyasha. (I hope we get to see that, too!! Heh heh!) I liked the way Yukina told Keiko about Kagome, too, so she doesn't really blame her. (Of course, she felt she was coerced just from the tape she saw already.) It would be neat to have them meet and become friends. Kagome doesn't know Yusuke was married -- could THAT be the catalyst for her to get angry instead of guilty? This is just wonderful. I love the way you are fleshing out the characters and their relationships with each other. The first chapter was so sad and Kagome was so pathetic that I wasn't sure where this story would go. (Too much angst gets to me.) But this is such a full-bodied piece of work, and you are hitting all the right notes. So far, there are 3 real villains: Yusuke, of course, (and you even wove in a SLIGHT amount of sympathy for him -- just because he's a baka), Inuyasha, and Kikyou. Those two really make me sick playing around with others the way they do because they aren't really happy with each other, but seem to be addicted to each other. Yeah, I'd really like for Inuyasha to see or hear about Kagome and have some second thoughts about his feelings for her, so Hiei can mop up the floor with him. (Or maybe Kagome could do it herself!) I will be faithfully and anxiously awaiting your next chapter!
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