| "Kagome's life" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: why!!!????
Reviewed By: biaome On: March 20, 2008 08:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay i'm gonna sound mean but why the hell does she have two mates?? if it were me i would have gone with sesshomaru because of yasha's inablitiy to pick between kikyo and kagome!!! then yasha gets kagura which is totally akward! but with them two mates...let me just say she sounds like a selfish bitch! INUYASHA LOST A GOOD THING!! (which was kagome)but what the hell man! she doesn't need them both..i m ean she'll always love yasha but she;s found true love with sess...but in my opinion you should have given her a longer period of time to choose her 'soul mate' of 'the one'....but over all i guess the story is good...except for that one factor...but i'm so glad yasha FINALLY killed KIKYO!! YESSSSSS!!! oh if you wanna e-mail me my address is biancas1500@yahoo.com...or you can go to my myspace!and look for me!
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Reviewed By: invisblg9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhh!!! That was sooooo wonderful!!! I loved it very much. It was sooo sad but I think it was very cool the way the modern Shippo told Kagome what to do to get a peaceful life with everyone still alive. I almost cried but I laughed in the end when Kagome threaten Sesshomaaru with an empty bed. Boy he get's toooo jealous. Oh and your other stories are wonderful. I can't wait for you to update on your sequal to Student/Teacher relationship, or something else? bye bye for now!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 08:21 CDT
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i stiil cant believe no1 has stopped by :O cant believe and now im soooo behind the stories u got T-T CURSE THE FICKING HOSPITAL!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 01:02 CDT
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interesting story... really enjoyed reading it... it was nice to see that Sesshomaru and Inuyasha can get along at some point with Kagome as their mate... great work... good job!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 02:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i loved it!!! loved how the ending went ^.^ and i was laughing hard 'Only because you threatened me with an empty bed' hahahahaha i love that!!!!!!! and ill start reading the new story ^.^ from #1 fan
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
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*falls off chair* WHAT!!! T-T but in a way this week will go fast for me.... seen i got a wedding friday >.< i HOPE it wont be LONG!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o your ending it there?? why..... T-T
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* awwwwww creepy...... Kagome is scary when shes angry T-T
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i panicked like a mad cow when Sesshy said Inuyasha is dead >_< thank god!!! but WHY WHY!!!!!??????
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmmmm Naraku is soooooo OOC lol its sooooo bloody strange XD but yay the chapter is up *jumps for joy* im soooo happy ^^ from ya #1 fan
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 07:48 CDT
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no chatper T-T
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting/bad ending lol XP awww you got grounded >_< i was about to but then my dumbass brother caught it :D lol anyways 2 months.... wow ^.^
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 03:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo i vant wait for friday ^.^ hehe and im hoping Sango has tiwns or something XD anyways stilling loving the story from ya #1 fan
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 05:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aghhh i missed so much chapters >_< god damn easter camping..... how ever i LOVE it!!!! but Naraku *shivers* god i would grab anythng and hit his fat ass head XD anyways keep it up guys!! from ya #1 fan
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Title: Kagome's Life
Reviewed By: The Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very amusing fic. Haven't seen many like that out there. I hope to see the next chapter up very soon. It was original and enjoyable. Some things that could be changed: The form of the writing; when each person speaks it is a new line. In the spelling and grammar catagory, there are few errors, but I suggest writing the chapters in a word processor before uploading(or however it is put up). I hope these comments were not too harsh, for you are a fantastic writer and I hope to see more chapters and improved grammar in them. I greatly enjoyed reading this story and I look forward to more chapters soon.
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