| "Kagome's life" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 13:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love THIS ALOT!!! Stupid Sess always bein an ass. Gosh y can't he ever be nice 4 once? lol. I RELE LOVE IT THOUGH SO UPDAT SOON!!!!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 01:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
STILL LOVING THIS STORY!!!!! but Sesshy n Kagome are over or not....... but this is sooooo good ^-^ n dont worry i understand high school really sucks here aswell >_< from ya #1 fan
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Reviewed By: coldheartedvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 21:52 CST
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Please continue , its very good.Here and there you put the wrong words or didn't put a word or two.I would suggest re-reading it when you finish a chapter to prevent that.Also please make them a little longer.Otherwise it's a good stroy line and is writen well.My compliments.
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Reviewed By: Shadow Sun On: February 26, 2007 22:02 CST
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I love your fic, is different. Congratulations
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww i screamed when u said updating for me *giggles..... jumps up n runs in a circle* love it!!!! ^^ i hope u keep updating for me ^^ cant eait to see how this is going to end XD im starting to LOVE sesshy/kagome ^-^ aww its sooo cute from #1 fan!!
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Reviewed By: ThirdDemonKags [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 23:57 CST
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you may consider putting it into better grammer and spacing out the convo's more....i am not guna say my story is the best but go there and you'll see what i mean...its called A Little Thing Called LOVE!! by ThirdDemonKags anyway i like the plot!!!
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: JamminChick93613 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 16:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Everything goes sooo fast... I mean WTF!!! It's good though so Update soon
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Reviewed By: naracrazy2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 06:44 CST
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I love this story! The chapters could be a little longer, though. Some people don't review because they don't always know what to say. They want to put in some constructive criticism, but they don't want it to seem insulting. Anyway, I love it! Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 02:37 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
am i the only 1 who is reviewing?? all well i dont care if the lemon part was shit but it was good ^^ i really like this story n awwww i would LOVE to be in Sesshy's arms >_< lol but please dont put Inuyasha and Kikyo together.... what ever you do please dont.... from ya #1 fan :D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 01:15 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
alright now im happy that Inuyasha didnt have control thats good at least... n i cant wait until the next chapter *giggles* but please dont make it too short :( but your number 1 fan here XD lol keep writing please n.... type fast once again :D
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 00:33 CST
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awwwwww your turning Inuyasha into a bad guy >_< but i think i can keep my self on track XP but Sesshy didnt even listen to her T-T awwww please type as fast as you can ^^
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Reviewed By: mischievous female [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story!
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay thank you for fixing it! and i love this story too bad you got ya self grounded.... seen that i just finised my 5 weeks of grounded lol anyways i hope that it goes quick for both ^^
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2007 02:20 CST
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the last part i wouldnt read most of it seen that it kept going pass the edge.... so could you fix that?? n so far i like it ^^
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 19:53 CST
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great so far and keep it to where its a few more chapters b-4 they sleep together and make him flirt and be romantic.. and stuff like that or u could hve inuyasha kiss kagome and hve shess see it and get all mad and stuff and kagome try and explain what happend and he not belive her and she end up goin to her time and he decided he made a horrible mistake and goes after her.
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